the lion and the tulip
Lilith is a wallflower, a teenager who fights hard to survive, her indifferent mother, lost father, and creepy stepfather. Her wounds are invisible superficially. For others, she's just a freak.
Daniel is the definition of strength. blonde with streaks of golden brown clumsy hai blue eyes, and fire in his eyes. He is the crowned prince of Atlantis, the everlasting nation. His battles turn the hells into ash. And all he needs is his soulmate to complete his crown.
This is the story of two worlds in collision, two people in a collision that can make the strongest pair in the universe How will Lilith's and Daniels's worlds collide? Through the freaking dreams. I don't know for now.
But if they meet it's more than just the Sparks. Be with me in this wonderful ride of battles, romance, adventure friendship action, mysteries, and love.
The authors really know how to use the concept of "Showing and not telling" which is a very positive sign for me. Though its a goody, there's still a big untapped potential here especially if the author wants to get a contract. It can still improve further to the next level. Thus, I kindly suggest this improvement -Grammar improvement - I encourage using grammarly in your work. I believe you can take it to the next level. Wishing for the Best and Keep it up![img=recommend]
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It's a killer story to begin with.I love the way it unfolds It begins simple and later it's like building up and up like a building rising from the basement.It won't bore anyone who reads for sure.❤️
The story is one of a kind and I am in love with the writing.Its very detailed.I can imagine the battle field when I read these lines.The characters are special for me.Its definitely one of the best books I have read in here.
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I like this story, it's very interesting I like the concepts of it. I believe this has immense potential, however, for it to reach its highest point I suggest that the grammar be worked on it. It's a little hard for me to enjoy the story because I noticed many grammatical errors. Besides that though, its still a good story I love the way how the author shows things instead of telling us, I really like. If only comics did that... Any, I wish the author the best of luck!
The descriptions are amazing, and the use of the setting in the story and characters is really well done to give this celestial, mysterious kind of atmosphere in the work.
Good start. Keep going at it young author! Keep writing and updating, Try to write 1000 words per day. Doesn't matter what you write, it doesn't have to be a good chapter. Just write whatever comes to your mind and you can always edit it out later.
This was a good read overall, great story, great concept and good characters, the only problem is the few grammar mistakes (Like I always say it's not a problem, and dosen't hinder a good story and can be fixed with ease) other than that it's a really good story, so keep it up, Author!
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This book is like a continuous collection of dreams.And I really love the way it flows.keep writing.This one is really special.✨I read these chapters repeatedly these days.