The Strongest Avenger {Indefinite Hiatus}

hey author, see my comments, and continue with this project that in my opinion is one of the best fan-fic on the webnovel, and readers, I recommend D +

This is so good I love it I feel it has a lot of potential please keep writing author sama ............thank you ............................

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I applaud anyone who takes the time to write a story. It is a huge undertaking to effectively write a story that is well thought out and developed. This is not one of those stories, I enjoy op characters and fanfics but this one is a bit much on the op. The main characters plot is rushed through any relevant storyline in order to give him some new op power or artifact. I can understand that its only a few chapters in but the main characters personality is like Hermione in the first film its grating and full of himself if it develops more and he faces any real trials or any possible limitations to his abilities maybe a story can emerge. Slow down on the time skips develop the characters and the powers before giving him more ubsurd power. There may be a good story in there but not without developing the characters, the plot, and most importantly makeing the world your own give some life to the other character

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Nothing glaringly wrong with this book. Grammar is pretty good by Webnovel fanfic standards. Story development is a bit iffy but I didn't really enjoy the story so I wasn't paying much attention, honestly, so I'll give it a 4 just to round it off. Character design...I don't know what to say. It's okay, I guess? MC isn't that interesting but he is clever and a realistic take on what people would actually wish for if given the chance to reincarnate or transmigrate by some R.O.B - so he wishes for the most OP stuff you could ever think of, basically. There will be no challenges ahead for the MC and no suspense whatsoever because he's honest to god the strongest thing in his Universe and he's not even fully grown yet, I don't think. Well, he'll be the strongest thing if beings like Death and Eternity don't exist. I'm not sure if they're included in this book or not, so don't quote me on that. So, all in all, it's a good book. It's just not for me. But I don't like absurdly OP protagonists so it's to be expected, honestly. But if that's your type of book, then read this story now. It'll no doubt satisfy you.

I haven't even read it yet I'm so hyped, thanks for the. Story I hope there's no swearing within every sentence, that brings the quality of the story down.

I haven't even read it yet I'm so hyped, thanks for the. Story I hope there's no swearing within every sentence, that brings the quality of the story down.

more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more I hope can read more chapters every day.

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I think the story is going well so far, it’s interesting and has good updates and the grammar is clearly understood so I will continue to read as long as you continue to write. Do forget to rate and review everyone!

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Thanks for your hard work so keep up and don't drop this story and hope you post more chapters soon. Really great work. Keep up with new chapters and updates to read and don't drop this because its really something new. Waiting for him to become more powerful and visit other worlds to get more stornger ecc.