To Be Loved | TVD

Writing quality is extremely good! Stability of updates check! Story Development good! Character Design good! No robotic conversations, the character development is good! World Background good and spot on!

Please for the love of all that is holy unholy and everything inbetween keep writing this novel it is absolutely fan freaking tastic and i think its great

So far this story has been going strong. The Main Character has already shown some mental growth, and has a well grounded personality, and we can even see the start of more mental growth. Now, this story seems to be a Minor to Mild AU at the moment, however it seems to generally keep in line with all established rules of the Universe, and Major events seem to have happened, even if slightly changed. One Change that is important to note is that Hayley is younger than her canon counterpart, with canon Hayley being a few years older then the MF Gang, whereas this one is the same age. This comes with a few consequences, and I'm eagerly waiting to see how the Author explores this. Another change is the fact that an interesting Propechy swirls around Hayley, which leads to a few questions. What is Darkness? If their is Darkness is their light? And many more questions. Now, a minor setback, is the fact that her like of the Mikaelsons does seem rather heavy handed. She seems to have some sort of irrational liking of them, to the point where she is even 'drawn' to old objects of theirs, and seems to want to help them. This can be explained slightly because of certain events that caused a unique relationship with a Mikaelson, but it still does come off as rather heavy handed, as the Author is coming into this knowing the MCs relationships, and that shows in how the MC interacts with the world.

I would have given 5 stars but unfortunately there is no stability of the MAJ.The story is really great, perfect I would say.Harley has her head on her shoulders, she's not blinded by Elena's perfect miss And she is good at what she does. I love everything about her, I hope she protects Caroline from Damon before the Salvatore arrives with verbena and other stuff. The poor thing lived quite a bit in the series while Elena lives her best life as a vampire girlfriend. Caroline's injuries are never mentioned.I really hope you come back soon, I can't wait to continue reading this story.

This is the good stuff 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩 🤩 author come back we need you 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭😭 🥲 🥲 🥲🥲 🥲 🥲 🥲 🥲 🥲 🥲😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢☹️☹️☹️☹️☹️☹️☹️☹️☹️☹️☹️☹️☹️☹️☹️☹️☹️☹️☹️☹️☹️☹️☹️☹️☹️☹️☹️☹️😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬

A história é incrível,gostei principalmenteda interaçãodela com a família mikaelson, porémfiquei curiosa porque claramente há coisas diferentes o que deixa tudo mais misterioso ,mas terá continuação??????????????????????????????????????????????????

I have gone all the way to chapter 14 and this has been very entertaining and a interesting twist to the story I hope this continues

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UPDATE PLEASEEEEE 😭😭😭🙏🏻 DONT DROP THIS STORY😭😭😭

I hope you won't abandon it and update it regularly. And hope for more detail intimate scenes. And some more character development.

PLease. Update soon I am really enjoying ur book

I like it, I just wish it would continue updating 🥰

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