A really good novel like anything this author writes, as always exceptional!
Good to find another GOT here besides mine, keep it up!
4 years ago
88
LargeFarva
Shameless author review! This is a story of a man reborn as Lancel Lannister, and given a gift he assumes to be the Super Soldier Serum. Read how Lancel attempts to use his knowledge of A Game of Thrones, and navigates the dangers of Westeros.
4 years ago
50
ryanryan
Haven’t read it yet but I’m just going to assume it’s good based on the author.
4 years ago
41
Squirtortle
The least terrible Game of Thrones story on Webnovel.
4 years ago
13
W_D_3766
I'm at a loss for words to describe this even though it might be slow at times when it speeds up it makes it worth it with that being said everything is great and to the author my hat off to u very good job
4 years ago
13
amaturewriter
Ur other bk is amazing, this so far is also amazing. so here have the stars.
An SI as a nephew of tywin rather than his son or bastard....nice. I love the interactions between tywin and MC, more would be nice. And reading C5, u might;ve more or less captured his personality. rare in an FF also nice. PLus, i decent eng and grammar is another plus I suppose.
**: tyrion,,,be friends...damn man, this dude has a sad life. also he is smart and useful. same with hound,
also ......
*Roman tactics and ships and toilets and sewage
*soap and glass and also teach to make plows and weapons and ****
*basic hygiene
*farming and crop rotation
*make MC a seer and warg? use ants and crows to spy?
and I;ll ask the same thing I ask all GOT FF writers, if theres romance, dont make it sad, dont make the chick useless slut/princess....make her useful.
---anyway, like ur other ****, and this **** too...dont drop. GL
4 years ago
6
Krutch
MC becomes unlikable about halfway through, different plots just kill whatever character development was established for him and his family.
Much worse than the author's professor dovahkin story, but it doesn't really matter since author can't finish anything he starts anyway.
4 years ago
5
Daoist380024
I am reviewing again just so I can gibe this story the proper respect it deserves. THE best got/asoiaf fanfic out in any platform, and definitely in the top five the most well written stories in this site. Im actually planning to make a spacebattles forum just so I can support you there also
4 years ago
5
ThreePurities
Just don't try to make every reader happy because you will only fail. just be yourself and write your world. (insert other motivational things here.)
4 years ago
5
Eggcellent
Best Game of thrones fanfiction out there
Hope the release would be a tad faster though
Great MC (who isn't OP but still great) and I hope there will be a bit of character growth. Still early to judge everything but it is as good of a start as it could possibly be
4 years ago
4
Will_Caruso
This is a He** of a story!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
4 years ago
4
Courting_Death
Love it, honestly.
I love how you have your own perspective about the Lannisters.
Though I can't quite agree with your notion of GoT Cersei being as hot as ASOIAF Cersei.
Asiof Cersei remains supreme!! ( • ̀ω•́ )
So please don't drop this author!
Love ya Lots ^ω^
4 years ago
3
DaoistH7599X
pathetic mc, overrated. Even though he is a marine he doesn't have the spine to look Tywin in the eyes, his death is also for convinience he has no reason to drive while being sleepy.He doesn't even have control of his own thought he is slipping his thoghts out loud. what are you? middle schoolar angry to his mother and slips some profanity ?
3 years ago
2
Emanuel_Pitanga
if you are going to drop, can you post if you are going to drop or not? why I love this story, but waiting is killing me. But i love you autor-sama
4 years ago
2
Ballad
Finally a good Lannister Fic where author isnt a Stark or Dragon Gobbler, in this he's protecting he's family people always make Lannister to be some evil family when in reality every family in Westeros is equally scummy so I enjoy it and honestly I don't mind Myrcella as he's Fiancee so all in all a fun read that doesnt worship starks like all others lol starks the dumbest family is what I like to call them.
A really good novel like anything this author writes, as always exceptional! Good to find another GOT here besides mine, keep it up!
Shameless author review! This is a story of a man reborn as Lancel Lannister, and given a gift he assumes to be the Super Soldier Serum. Read how Lancel attempts to use his knowledge of A Game of Thrones, and navigates the dangers of Westeros.
Haven’t read it yet but I’m just going to assume it’s good based on the author.
The least terrible Game of Thrones story on Webnovel.
I'm at a loss for words to describe this even though it might be slow at times when it speeds up it makes it worth it with that being said everything is great and to the author my hat off to u very good job
Ur other bk is amazing, this so far is also amazing. so here have the stars. An SI as a nephew of tywin rather than his son or bastard....nice. I love the interactions between tywin and MC, more would be nice. And reading C5, u might;ve more or less captured his personality. rare in an FF also nice. PLus, i decent eng and grammar is another plus I suppose. **: tyrion,,,be friends...damn man, this dude has a sad life. also he is smart and useful. same with hound, also ...... *Roman tactics and ships and toilets and sewage *soap and glass and also teach to make plows and weapons and **** *basic hygiene *farming and crop rotation *make MC a seer and warg? use ants and crows to spy? and I;ll ask the same thing I ask all GOT FF writers, if theres romance, dont make it sad, dont make the chick useless slut/princess....make her useful. ---anyway, like ur other ****, and this **** too...dont drop. GL
MC becomes unlikable about halfway through, different plots just kill whatever character development was established for him and his family. Much worse than the author's professor dovahkin story, but it doesn't really matter since author can't finish anything he starts anyway.
I am reviewing again just so I can gibe this story the proper respect it deserves. THE best got/asoiaf fanfic out in any platform, and definitely in the top five the most well written stories in this site. Im actually planning to make a spacebattles forum just so I can support you there also
Just don't try to make every reader happy because you will only fail. just be yourself and write your world. (insert other motivational things here.)
Best Game of thrones fanfiction out there Hope the release would be a tad faster though Great MC (who isn't OP but still great) and I hope there will be a bit of character growth. Still early to judge everything but it is as good of a start as it could possibly be
This is a He** of a story!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
Love it, honestly. I love how you have your own perspective about the Lannisters. Though I can't quite agree with your notion of GoT Cersei being as hot as ASOIAF Cersei. Asiof Cersei remains supreme!! ( • ̀ω•́ ) So please don't drop this author! Love ya Lots ^ω^
pathetic mc, overrated. Even though he is a marine he doesn't have the spine to look Tywin in the eyes, his death is also for convinience he has no reason to drive while being sleepy.He doesn't even have control of his own thought he is slipping his thoghts out loud. what are you? middle schoolar angry to his mother and slips some profanity ?
if you are going to drop, can you post if you are going to drop or not? why I love this story, but waiting is killing me. But i love you autor-sama
Finally a good Lannister Fic where author isnt a Stark or Dragon Gobbler, in this he's protecting he's family people always make Lannister to be some evil family when in reality every family in Westeros is equally scummy so I enjoy it and honestly I don't mind Myrcella as he's Fiancee so all in all a fun read that doesnt worship starks like all others lol starks the dumbest family is what I like to call them.