It's horrible! It has no logic in it as well. He should put an AU tag because of all the **** he's made because many are complaining bout it... And after everything author, if and it's a big IF he changes it then ill change my review
5 years ago
8
Sakkaku_no_mori
Nice story. ,. .got a lot of potential. .please update more chapter, i was curious to know if he became a hero or just study at general department.
5 years ago
1
madman1010
dont know why some hate this its good why does everybody expect that everybody will write a 10/10 book as a fanfiction
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5 years ago
1
Uhum
Repost? I think i have read this before
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5 years ago
1
TheFalling
I like where this is going
5 years ago
1
ignatius_ogilvy
has potential but feels uncomfortable for some reason the dialogues---------------------------------------------------------------------------
It's horrible! It has no logic in it as well. He should put an AU tag because of all the **** he's made because many are complaining bout it... And after everything author, if and it's a big IF he changes it then ill change my review
Nice story. ,. .got a lot of potential. .please update more chapter, i was curious to know if he became a hero or just study at general department.
dont know why some hate this its good why does everybody expect that everybody will write a 10/10 book as a fanfiction . .
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I like where this is going
has potential but feels uncomfortable for some reason the dialogues---------------------------------------------------------------------------
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