The Strength Needed: A RWBY Tale

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Plot is too forced If u can tolerate it then, rest is good enough. ##########################################################################################

She gives the same high five because she is great. Do not pay attention to what others say, do everything your way because you do it well. Sorry english word i use google translator

I recommend this book for anyone that's want to find a good story, this one is a must to read book, give it a try, i guarantee this one is a great story.

somehow, I'm annoyed reading it.

i like the book 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃

love the book, the story development and the main character!! This book has tons of potential and I hope the author doesn't drop it like most do, the author writes well and has only a few grammar mistakes and plot holes (that I could notice atleast after all I'm not all knowing) Thanks for the great book so far author san

I read the entire book. Its extremely well written with very few plotholes. I gave 3 stars for character design but that was mainly because of my own dislike of some of the MC decisions. I understand why the author wrote him that way but still I hate the over goody 2 shoes. Why would he let his enemies live? He had every right to kill them at least in my opinion

I swear ive seen this authors name somewhere before but its a good book. its weired cause it shouldve been in my library. Im fairly maybe it got removed by webnovel i somtimes lose books from my library my own got removed once.

I'm a new fan to this fan fiction and I love the story. If you can get past the first few chapters then it is a lot better (the first few chapters are also good).

g Ood

I'm gonna be honest the MC is meh, not good, not bad just average i guess *shrugs*, the story at the start is all over the place and too fast paced, the story doesn't suck me in theres no hype, no excitement things just happens I barely care about the MC or his family the OC's are ok i guess? overall noting stands out its very average a bit boring

(Ch30) I’m just dropping this here cus the story just keeps getting worse and worse. Every time I think it stops it just keeps digging itself a bigger hole. The action is average at best and isn’t really the man focus of the story. The story isn’t bad but just boring and is really the main reason I’m dropping. If I’m skipping chapter after chapter just to speed run the boring af dialogue then ur probably doing something wrong. And the romance is by far the worst part about this. from like chapter 1-15 or something the romance was pretty stiff and just overall not great but there wasn’t harem and it was tolerable. But then the author just adds neo to the harem and after that it just goes downhill. How they meet is forced, how they interact is forced, how his girlfriend just kinda excepts this is also really forced. Everyone in the story is just kinda ok with this now and there little backlash. It’s extremely unnatural. I know the author is never going to read this cuz the story finished like 2y ago but I wanted to be a silly little guy.

first of all the plot is very forced. Second, the character is very beta since he is a lion! who are very proud Third, at first it had a decent romance until then it became completely meaningless.