Love the story and I think that the mc has a very interesting quirk. His personality reminds me of myself. Definitely a different MHA fanfic.
4 years ago
4
Dchy23
I like fanfics with leisure MCs who goes about at his own pace. His story and ideals are separate from Izuku, yet occasionally intersecting into the picture of the original storyline - making this fanfic a perfect balance between carbon copying and originality which relates to the MHA fans yet doesn't bore them, at least for me. Although I read other MHA fanfics alr, I find this novel more pleasing and engaging to me.
Readable grammar and sentence structures (with some slight errors) is a rare commodity in fanfics but gladly appreciated. I also like how the author introduces his MC in a way that I have an initial and concise understanding of him yet stimulating my curiosity to learn even more about him by reading further.
Nevertheless, this fanfic is still new, so I do have my concerns whether the updates can remain consistent, and the possibility that the author can just drop this story anytime without prior notice (my biggest pet peeve). But overall, one of the best MHA fanfics I've read. Cheers!!
4 years ago
3
Trap_Mocha
Interesting story with a pretty interesting main character, with some interesting views. (Interesting 3 times in one sentence?!?)
Main character is kind of like Shikamaru with the strategic mind, sin of sloth and unenthusiastic attitude. He is not completely incapable in hand-to-hand combat and can pull his own weight and be a powerhouse on his own, which is where he differs to Shikamaru. Oh, he also seems to be kind of competitive though he doesn't really show it.
(Spoilers)
Story so far is up to the Hero Internships and there is no major canon divergence just yet. Though some things are undeniably different. For example, It's either Sato or Koda who are replaced to allow the main character to be apart of 1-A; During the U.S.J invasion the protagonist teleported several students to the school to save as many as possible; and he also came in first during the U.A. Sports Festival. With Todoroki and Bakugo coming in 2nd and third place respectively.
I'd like to say that I'd love to see a bit more character interactions as well as descriptions, but that's just me.
A big thing I'd like to bring up about this story is that I don't have much to look forward to or see any interesting events happening (besides a few canon events) which honestly makes me want to stop reading. I've decided to bookmark it in the end and give a review but ngl that can very easily change depending on what happens in the future.
Main Character's Abilities: Teleportation, of either himself or others, including objects. However, teleporting people does not come without it's drawbacks, as it can harm the user, with the pain scaling on distance and the amount of people he's teleporting.
Main Character has a few months worth of training in Martial Arts. As well as enhanced senses (Mainly sight) which allows him to see down to a microscopic level and giving him the ability to predict his foes attacks through muscle tension not unlike the Sharingan. Due to his enhanced sight putting a strain on both his eyes and brain he usually hides them behind a blindfold.
MC is currently 5'6, has green eyes, black hair and has a deceased father and a lovely mother who he cares about.
4 years ago
2
White_cat_chelo
I love the story, the protagonist is well written about Everything I like that it does not have unnecessary information please continue 😳👉👈
4 years ago
2
alexandersmith
I love the main characters easy-going attitude. The story is progressing without any unesesary elements. The mc powers are also interesting.
4 years ago
1
ChaMy
Muito bom...............................................................................................................................................
4 years ago
0
Potato_daoist
Didnt finish reading it but its good anyways im writing this review to Give the author a 1000iq plan make somekind of gun contraption and aim it so it would touch his finger tip since it keeps its momentum he would have a one shot kill.
Pretty good I like how the mc thought process is even tho im bring force to be a hero I my as well give it my best. RRrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
4 years ago
0
DiperZ
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Love the story and I think that the mc has a very interesting quirk. His personality reminds me of myself. Definitely a different MHA fanfic.
I like fanfics with leisure MCs who goes about at his own pace. His story and ideals are separate from Izuku, yet occasionally intersecting into the picture of the original storyline - making this fanfic a perfect balance between carbon copying and originality which relates to the MHA fans yet doesn't bore them, at least for me. Although I read other MHA fanfics alr, I find this novel more pleasing and engaging to me. Readable grammar and sentence structures (with some slight errors) is a rare commodity in fanfics but gladly appreciated. I also like how the author introduces his MC in a way that I have an initial and concise understanding of him yet stimulating my curiosity to learn even more about him by reading further. Nevertheless, this fanfic is still new, so I do have my concerns whether the updates can remain consistent, and the possibility that the author can just drop this story anytime without prior notice (my biggest pet peeve). But overall, one of the best MHA fanfics I've read. Cheers!!
Interesting story with a pretty interesting main character, with some interesting views. (Interesting 3 times in one sentence?!?) Main character is kind of like Shikamaru with the strategic mind, sin of sloth and unenthusiastic attitude. He is not completely incapable in hand-to-hand combat and can pull his own weight and be a powerhouse on his own, which is where he differs to Shikamaru. Oh, he also seems to be kind of competitive though he doesn't really show it. (Spoilers) Story so far is up to the Hero Internships and there is no major canon divergence just yet. Though some things are undeniably different. For example, It's either Sato or Koda who are replaced to allow the main character to be apart of 1-A; During the U.S.J invasion the protagonist teleported several students to the school to save as many as possible; and he also came in first during the U.A. Sports Festival. With Todoroki and Bakugo coming in 2nd and third place respectively. I'd like to say that I'd love to see a bit more character interactions as well as descriptions, but that's just me. A big thing I'd like to bring up about this story is that I don't have much to look forward to or see any interesting events happening (besides a few canon events) which honestly makes me want to stop reading. I've decided to bookmark it in the end and give a review but ngl that can very easily change depending on what happens in the future. Main Character's Abilities: Teleportation, of either himself or others, including objects. However, teleporting people does not come without it's drawbacks, as it can harm the user, with the pain scaling on distance and the amount of people he's teleporting. Main Character has a few months worth of training in Martial Arts. As well as enhanced senses (Mainly sight) which allows him to see down to a microscopic level and giving him the ability to predict his foes attacks through muscle tension not unlike the Sharingan. Due to his enhanced sight putting a strain on both his eyes and brain he usually hides them behind a blindfold. MC is currently 5'6, has green eyes, black hair and has a deceased father and a lovely mother who he cares about.
I love the story, the protagonist is well written about Everything I like that it does not have unnecessary information please continue 😳👉👈
I love the main characters easy-going attitude. The story is progressing without any unesesary elements. The mc powers are also interesting.
Muito bom...............................................................................................................................................
Didnt finish reading it but its good anyways im writing this review to Give the author a 1000iq plan make somekind of gun contraption and aim it so it would touch his finger tip since it keeps its momentum he would have a one shot kill.
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Pretty good I like how the mc thought process is even tho im bring force to be a hero I my as well give it my best. RRrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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