Pretty good and worth the read. Although the start of the story has a lot of grammar problems it gets fixed in the later chapters.
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4 years ago
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Zero_Unknown_2873
the way u wrote the beginning chapters from the mothers pov to me was a better choice and better story then how u ended up going but it still was I good story
Pretty good and worth the read. Although the start of the story has a lot of grammar problems it gets fixed in the later chapters. ........
the way u wrote the beginning chapters from the mothers pov to me was a better choice and better story then how u ended up going but it still was I good story