I enjoyed this story to full capacity. Maybe you could write longer chapters? It's definitely worth a read though. I love the characters and the mom character seems like a hyperbolic interpretation or mothers XD.
4 years ago
5
Ben_C_4947
I quite like this story, and I quite like all of the background characters, but I wish there were more of them! This is really interesting, and has a similar ring around it to Legend Of Etch. Keep it up!
4 years ago
5
Cassidy_Lynn
The story is quite compelling, but I do hope that we get some more word background in the future! Baxter and Baxton seem quite nice and I'd love to see some more of them.
4 years ago
5
Cassidy_Lynn
I like the fast releases of new chapters because it gives me something to read whilst bored. The characters have more depth not and I love how you've designed the world background to really revolve around this one character, with the rest being around her. This seems more realistic, but I do wish there was a little more description.
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I enjoyed this story to full capacity. Maybe you could write longer chapters? It's definitely worth a read though. I love the characters and the mom character seems like a hyperbolic interpretation or mothers XD.
I quite like this story, and I quite like all of the background characters, but I wish there were more of them! This is really interesting, and has a similar ring around it to Legend Of Etch. Keep it up!
The story is quite compelling, but I do hope that we get some more word background in the future! Baxter and Baxton seem quite nice and I'd love to see some more of them.
I like the fast releases of new chapters because it gives me something to read whilst bored. The characters have more depth not and I love how you've designed the world background to really revolve around this one character, with the rest being around her. This seems more realistic, but I do wish there was a little more description.
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