QT:Just One Last Glance Of Your Smile(BL)
Bai Yu knew the moment he woke up that he had to find him...but,
Him? Who is 'him'?
Why can't I remember?
Bai Yu also knew that he, with the problem of his amnesia, will have an even harder time in finding this person inside his heart.
Just who is it? Who can make my heart yearn for and search for him everywhere like this? Even to the point of consenting to bind with a system and travel through different time and space just to find him somewhere in those worlds?
Bai Yu knew deep inside, that the road he took had no way to return and what lied at the end was a painful secret. But he just smiled and marched forward, his eyes holding deep love, yearning and sadness,
"Just one last time...I want to see your smile again."
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Warning: The story contains mature contents(profanities, gore, etc.)and gay love(boyxboy).
Disclaimer: The cover and other random pictures used in the story isn't mine. The credit goes to their original artists.
I would not read any LGBT, BL, etc. stories, but somebody insisted to give a try... ;) The storyline is very interesting, and I like your characters. I wonder who is He. Great job Author! Happy New Year!
I Like the starting so far and i'm getting a hang of the things going on. this is great to begin with, keep it up and let the release be more appealing.
A great start! From the few chapters I can feel that you have an idea for the story and you are following it! It's pleasure to read... You don't really struggle, like most of us, not English speakers, with tenses, style or grammar. It's your advantage over the rest, use it well! The plot is addictive, the characters are expressive. Everything is in place. You're doing a great job. I wish you an inspiration and a lot of great ideas! I will come back in a few day... ;)