Full Breath (Avatar Fanfic)
Jak Yanda, a young man with spiky reddish black hair, has nothing. He possessed neither memories of his past nor of the world he was currently living in.
The only thing he possessed was a sword on his waist and knowledge of sword skills and abilities. Possessing heightened senses, abnormal physical attributes and legendary sword skills, Jak will have to give his all to survive until he can figure out just who he really is.
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//This is the story of someone who needs to go through enormous character growth as he is essentially a blank slate. If he seems robotic and unfeeling in the start, that's because he is.
With no idea how to feel, no morals, no ideals, no purpose, he is essentially a husk of a human who seeks to find why he's even alive. To that end, he wont stop moving as he continues to travel and hopefully meet others who can help him what it means to exist.
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So I'm just going to say that this is not a novel that I would prefer to read. This fanfic starts off decent but the character power in my opinion is awful. This is Avatar The Last Airbender why would anyone get rid of the bending part. This world is filled with Spirits and so many more crazy things. So now this guy is just a sword user and it's not like there aren't, a hundred thousand stories were there's people that uses a sword. But I guess this one's different because its in avatar I'm sorry I just can't buy into it, no matter how many chapters I read.
I look forward to being able to read this every day. I have a question, will he be able to bend and if so which element would he use?.......
I mean, it's my own story so I should feel confident about it. Just give it a chance and it might actually surprise you on how decently good it is.
lol love the story so far keep up the good work author. P.S. the blood gods are pleased with your work. ....................................................................
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This is a pretty good one with as now a slightly op mc. The overall vibe is pretty good but will probably be a split between preferences. And for the other crossover character you introduced it was alright. If it's just a character who will not affect the world background (ie bringing ninjas) then you could have done your own character and make it slightly better. But so far it's good so far.
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i should say this was a very good read, and i would like to read more. ...
In Portuguese _ Toda Fan-Fic que se preze tem romance , não que fan-fics sem romance são ruins mas falta um sabor nelas. E como podem ver meus senhores eu dei 5 estrelas para não prejudicar o autor apenas expressei minha humilde opinião .
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