Leo always said that he loved the sunrise and sunset, in fact, I grew to love them too. Its funny how they seem had the brighter lights.
Never thought that he'd be one of them.
And as I kissed his forehead while we watched the sunrise, we were back to where we started, alone.
The story is interesting. One thing I want to add is that, the author should leave more paragraphs. The details and conversations are a little messed up, so it's a little bit hard to read. I gave you 5 stars only because I know you can improve and besides, one bad rating can ruin everything.
TBH,It's a good story. The fL is stupid but when you use the genre teen...you have remember that Teens are bound to do silly mistakes and that's what Lucy is doing...I won't give much spoilers coz it will apoil the fun. I want Lucia to be d@m adult but she as a teenage girl is acting a per age. As for Leo,I have no words for him. He is confusing me...I can't hate him nor I can like him.... But for once I really want them to think with a clam brain....and perhaps all their problems will be solved...but what's the fun of story if the solve the problem in day one?
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I like everything on this novel, it has a deep meaning and I wanted to read more from this book. Keep it up author! More chapters to come because I do wanted to read more too!!
This book is very good. From the start I really found it interesting and the plot is really nice. The characters and everything that happens make you want to read more!
I love this novel 😍 it was amazing to read 📚 not only this but other as well. hey I usually won't read this types of novel so I can't complain or comment any thing but I can say pls read the novels throughly if you miss one of it chapters then boom everything would be messed and you won't get what plot point. lastly Sis Ajona keep working pls 😭
the story that would drag you in, give it a chance to enjoy your time, lovely.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
This is a good story! I wonder what Lucia's daughter will react if her parents get back together? Well, let's see! Thank you for your hard work, Author!
A very romantic novel and i like how the author will add mystery in each chapter that hook me to know what will happened in the future chapter. can not wait to see how this novel will develop in the future. O(∩_∩)O
I totally fell in love with the cover and the synopsis. The latter was really well written, although it was too short. The first hundred words were definitely enough to capture my attention. I love the way the story explain the scene with good vocabulary. My only complaint is that I can't understand whether the story is in the third person or first person as that hasn't been mentioned. I am desperate to know more about the future of the two. I wonder how they will come back together and if they will ever fall in love again.
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After I read this chapter I notice some errors, though, it doesn't matter since the author delivered and make the scene clear for me. It's a thumbs up for me.
First loves are always the sweetest but the hardest to forget, no one can deny that we all have flash backs of our high schools selves and done stupid things that we thought that time are sane and rational. Then laugh it out when we grew out of it? Love the story...
One word, Drama. That's all you need to describe this novel. Purely dedicating your time to write heart wrenching stories, is nothing short of a sadistic author wanting to see the readers cry. Although there are grammatical errors, each chapter entails a vivid imagery that bypasses the novel's flaws. Still, there's lots to improve on so do your best in writing.
So far, I like the storyline. Very interesting. The characters are well introduced and I like how the author wrote the interactions between her characters. The flow is good, but I've noticed some minor grammatical errors that can sometimes confuse the current scenarioso. But overall, It's a good story. Definitely worth a read😊!! Nice job author!!