The unexpected Destiny
"Why are you crying? He asked in concern.
He was pacing back and forth as he heard her crying on the otherside of the phone. He was waiting patiently for her to tell him what the matter was but nothing was said, only cries could be heard. His patience was getting thin now and his worry was increasing with each passing second. He asked her again, " tell me dammit why are you crying?"
What is the phone call about? Why is the other person crying? And what is the matter?
Hridhaan Raichand: CEO of Trinity Hotel Group. He is kind; but is messed up within himself. He has a phobia that controls him mostly in taking one decision that are easy for other person's but for him the most difficult thing in his life.
What is his phobia? And will he overcome it?
Join the journey of The unexpected Destiny to find out what is going to happen.
This story has incredible potential, and the author's understanding of characters has managed to compliment the plot, little mistakes were seen here and there, but as far as I know everyone makes mistakes, you have a great skill of story telling and keep building on it😁❤️, a suggestion from me is that you should avoid over explaining things some times it's good but some times it disrupts continuity. overall it has been a very good read and waiting for the next chapters. Your understanding of your characters is just out of the league, as a writer I envy you. you're amazing. keep it up.😅❤️
Nicely written, grammar and punctuation is great, story is also awesome.... :) <3 good job author nim looking forward to readd your story even more