MHA: String Demon

5 star just because I want to see Dofla- cough cough, Charles making his underworld Empire in MHA. Nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice

Buddy this is one of the best premise of a MHA fan fiction I have ever seen. The character development and the quality of the plot is extremely satisfying. The writing quality is top notch. I could hardly find any grammatical mistakes. The split personalities that you have created add a spin to this story that I have never really seen anywhere before. And the powers of Doflamingo are so underrated, that it makes me glad that someone finally created this fic. All in all, a great read. I highly recommend it to a fan of MHA. I guess the only thing left to see is whether you will update regularly or not.

Just started this one as soon as i saw it released. So far weve gotten consistent and speedy updates. I hope the author keeps these quality chapters coming, I believe that this has rhe potential to be one of the best MHA fanfic novels. It doesnt have the typical “I CAN SEE THE FUTURE” OP protagonist. Instead we have a character with some actual depth and possibilities, I look forward to what will happen later!!!

doflamingo's devil fruit is one of the most versatile...... I really like the story so far, cant wait for more....... I only hope MC wont be a hero, being a hero is shit and the hero society is flawed

i like the way how the mc have a split personality with the power of doflamingo it's so good, can't wait for future chapters and how the mc going to meet the canon character's and show how strong he is. hope you'll keep updating the story it's so good and stay safe.

i hope he Will become the king of underworld same like doffy... And this is author job to make a good story. so i hope good story from u . ....

Author I had quick question who is going to be the love interest? Also I recommend Toga for the love interest. /////////////////////////////////////////////////////

This book has tons of potential! I read this book and it's latest chapters was released 4 hours ago so I guess updates are good. I like the idea of split personalitys, you shouldn't add more though (writing this during chapter 4's/5's release). Background is normal. You should use the strings to control people similar to a puppet lol

I like it so far but i think having bipolar Parents is worse then constant abuse coming from a personal perspective but thats just a Personal opinion, but i like the multipersonality disorder.

Its my ff so I will obviously give this five stars. Well then I hope you take time to read this and give me some feedback. Anyway have a great read and a great day!

ayooooo I can't wait for more chapters , is the mc gonna make his own villain organisation or join an existing one ? .................................

too bad u did the same ff that I was prepared. continue [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] I see big potential [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

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All good till the multiple personalities formed. Yeah a 4-year-old, abusive parent, string quirk, multiple personalities, although I wouldn't say intelligent but intelligent, and fairly slow plot progression although it might have sped up I haven't read that far. Honestly, it is good fanfic if you can deal with reading about an mc with multiple personalities. I would've preferred if you made him more similar to Doflamingo but in modern society.