The Worst Father(?) In One Piece
Light synopsis:
A Father with Daughter Complex
The daughter's with HUGE Father Complex and a bit of Yandere tendencies
BEFORE YOU START
- This fanfic do not resolve around pirates world all that much. Mostly resolve around Kingdom, Empire, Underground World.
-There are some new characters that I will introduce to fit the Mc backstory. The character design will come from different anime verse since my brain can't come up with a new characters that will sound interesting. Their fighting style mostly remain the same if they have one and will be fully integrated on one piece power system (including some tribe or clan)
but their personalities might change
-I will most certainly will not Follow canon, FUCK CANON. But there are some event that will come directly from the anime such as their background etc. but there will be slight change
- The power system will 'Mostly' remain the same. But don't put your hope high, i might change my mind
- I want to say that Mc don't have plot armour, but.... who am I to lie? if the MC dies early in the stories how will the story progresses right?
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A/N
This story is mostly Au and has quite a few change in the stories and timellime but not by much
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the cover photo and one piece is not mine, credit to the owner of this photo and Oda sensei
1/2 chapter everyweek
https://www.patreon.com/Amarhazlin
I'm the author, so what do you expect? Being shameless is the dao to succes. If you have any questions regardinf the book please comment here and i will try my best to answer it
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Overly Interesting is the best way to simply describe this story...the ideas, characters, and creativity are all almost top-tier...basically, I advise giving it a try even the first 4 chapters might get you hooked...the two downsides are the grammar mistakes and the updates of chapters if you are a person who focuses more on story than grammar then this is great for you and about the updates it's actually not bad so let me rephrase it: the writer is just too unlucky in real life so he wasn't able to update frequently but I am sure that after his problems are solved he will be updating at a constant rate and his chapters were decided to be prolonged from the 20th chapter which is a positive thing to this type of story...If You Decide To Give It A Try I Hope You Enjoy It As Much As I Did!!!😉👍🏻
▪︎Writing Quality...............☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎Story Development........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎Character Design...........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎Updating Stability..........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎World Background.........☆☆☆☆☆
The writing quality is good , story development is also good I can easily understand the character design and world background. The only thing I have a problem with is the updating stability but everything else is good and I love the story so please continue writing
Amazing how the story progressed so little in 13 chapters, we know a little bit of the protagonist's story as the father of Roger and the others and that's it ... We saw Roger's death and his burial ...I think you can do that in 5 chapters or less. So I think that's it ... A lot of bullshit.
...................................................................A great fanfick...................................................................................................
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the cover photo is cool, the story is unique and quite interesting to read (google translate)[img = koin][img = exp][img = exp][img = exp][img = exp]
The fanfiction has a lot of potential and also has a great start. The only problem would the grammar but the can be easily fix. /////////////////////////////////////////////////////
Very good story [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
more chapter pls
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