LIFE IN 2021

Spoiler Alert:Remember in Chapter 3, Michael and Williams were shot, the point is that they didn't die. In Chapter 25, Prince and co didn't survive after their bodies were restricted from escape. Introducing 5 other characters from 5 different countries:USA,India, China, Korea, and Philippine as the 10 of them will have to survive or die in a horror state of coma, if they die in this horror state of coma, they die in real life. LIFE IN 2021 will end on December 31st, please keep reading and supporting, I wish all chapters would be free but it's locked😭 yet the love am receiving from this book is too much, this is going to be the best book on Webnovel just like the Vampire System, I love you guys, I see you viewing, voting, reviewing, etc, only God will bless you for the little time you've spent on my story.

The Good: The writing quality is well done and we have a plethora of characters to read about. The Bad: What is going on in this story? The plot is so disjointed that I can't follow it. It reads more like a term paper than a novel. The grammar is surprisingly well done, but the actual structure needs a lot of work. I can't tell if the author is improving or not as the quality stays the same for all of the free chapters. Maybe they were all added at once? The s*x scene made me giggle and I don't think that was intentional. The Neutral: Not much of a horror or thriller, but that might be in the later chapters that are locked behind premium. What I am having the most difficult time with is following where the plot is going. I feel like it is just a list of things that are happening without much else. Regardless, read your work out loud and you will catch many of the issues with readability. While the character descriptions are great, the world still feels empty. Is this meant to be a biography of sorts?

Chapter 28 ending and chapter 29 was so scary, the scenes haven't left me up till now, l can wait for more horror chapters, I love this book 🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤

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I'm excited about the plan! I love the flow! I'm looking forward to read more! Highly recommended! Great job! Keep it up. I'm currently reading it. And the more I read, the more I get curious.

I like how realistic the book was written. The conversations are of in time and one would relate and would somehow connect the deeper you get into the book. Nicely done.

I love the coherent flow of this story, and the manner in which the author has painted the world for the MC.. It's indeed alluring, as you would want to find out what will happen next. I love this book, it is very commendable... Kudos to the author..

It's a good book but seeing that word 'am' substitute for the word 'I'm' drives me crazy. Saying something like racism only happens in America when it also happens between fellow people and Nigerians suffering there wasn't my cup of tea. I give it a six.

i really like how real it is, how the characters are their true selves, that's what we all need in a book, great induction of your culture :) your novel touches hearts, welldone!

Such a great story author , the blurb of your story is interesting, I love how your writing .The story is enchanting and so cool at the same time , keep it up author and great work. 🥰

I dont even know where to start with this review. The writing is solid, yes. the character descriptions are okay but this is very confusing. The book is under horror and thriller but there is zero horror and thriller inside it. There speech pattern sometimes made zero sense. The first chapter had me very worried, you claim to be a Nigerian but your description and demoralization of the country you live in was very concerning, especially with the fact that the book is written in an international platform It shows a lack of patriotism, openly dismissing your country then trying to cover it up by degrading another country was a bit sad to me Then america, you quickly assumed the living conditions there, in a way slandering it. Still very concerning I also noticed you dropping your bank information in the comment section? is that allowed? I honestly thought i would get horror from this but i was very disappointed

The story at the beginning made me think of life as someone young and inexperience to what life outside is. Very recommended to people who want to read something deep.

I love how well-written, and insightful this is! It's much more serious, and relatable then other novels I've read on here, if that's your cup of tea you'll love this novel. Can't wait for more chapters!

I realy liked the conversation at the start between the friends about their lives in the future, it seems like a real conversation that most people have at that age. I also admire how the main character doesn't just want the stereotypical American dream. My main criticism is the grammar and spelling could use some work. I also feel like writing that you agree with the quote the you mentioned felt a bit unecessary. Still, its a good job.