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Nice story development and amazing world-building. Meticulous in crafting the plot so well that made me inspired to write too. A likeable MC that was very enjoyable as a company while I read his story. Kudos!

I a huge fan of video game novels so I was quite excited by the concept in the synopsis. Was quite excited to start reading until the MC got in the game. I don't know why I had this image in my head he was at least a good gamer. well color me shocked when my veteran gamer to throw a turntrum when he touched a dummy with a dagger and didn't do damage, when my veteran started running from a dummy. oh how I was heart broken.

An age old Full dive MMORPG trope but the MC is really hilarious. Generally most of RPG's goes with a dark or cliched but this one is different. The subtle humor makes this a refreshing take on the game genre. Wish to more of this. Great Work!!!

The concept for this book is incredible, and I'm hooked already! This book has the potential to become something amazing, my best wishes to the author!

The revIews Before mine tell most the words i want to say. I’ll be frank just read It. ill ad comments as story progresses if needed. oh yea word count.

Dark of night and waxing moon come to us a single pool hear us sing our witches' song and send us moonlight clear and strong Earth and water, wind and fire one and all you must conspire to banish bad for goodness sake cos I need moonshine for my cake Weary travelers long ago shared their bread and made a vow that they will be forever friends and so shall be until time ends

So where to start, it's like you are lost and then among the whole forest filled with creepers, you find a watermelon. That's the feeling you get.

The concept of this book incredible. I want nothing more than to read the whole book at once. More chapters author! Good Job this on this one

Writing quality is great! Like it a lot. The way you described the background is praise-worthy. And the plot is interesting too. Good work! Keep going!

I like The concept and story backround so far. A few things that kinda put me off was the lack of a goal for the mc or a clear direction the story is going towards. It seems like he will do anything given to him due to a lack of Character Debth. idk if this will be solved later, but I hope it does. Lastly i found how everything seems skripted as in the mc goes into a quest and its like “kill 10 boars” and “kill boss”. I mean with a game with free thinking ai and super developed mechanics im sure they would make more interesting quests and paths that make experiences right? Anyways still enjoying the book and I hope it continues.