New Gamer's Multiverse

Hello, I am the author of this Fanfic, I only started writing a few months ago and it has been a rough road... But I hope now that I kinda know what I am doing and also trying to write, That it is enjoyable. Thank you and ask questions if you want down below

I'm just a Wanderer Reader....... but when I see the smut tag with a combination of the harem and anti-hero...... it makes me curious what route it's going to be.....but.." You know where this is going... simply according to the tag"😏😏.. Now... Time to read...

I like your story at the moment, but i don‘t like how our MC lets someone get raped just to get blackmail material, espacially seing how that woman is probably in the harem in the future, and even if shes not in the harem i still don’t like our MC, i mean i hate most MCs with the Gamers Body (Or was it mind?) considering that they lose most emotions and just let things happen for example the rape scene where he just let them continue and filmed it... btw you should‘ve added a RAPE tag

i want moar moar moar MOAR MOOAARR MOOOAAARRR MOOOOOAAAAAARRRR ............................................................................................................

overall it's not worth reading. wasted an hour of my not so precious time reading it. in the end I was thoroughly disappointed. I mean it's all over the place, the story I mean. it's like the author wrote this without thought and direction. don't get me wrong the quality of chapters are acceptable no obvious grammar errors or anything. it's just like that the story is written by a person with a short attention span. super short. the MC comes out like a mental patient bordering Schizophrenia

Not the best but already better than all the fic of ghostyz. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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can you release more chapters I think you should release at least 6 chapters and start decreasing at least 2 chapter's think about it story is great but you will get less views

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Moreeeeeee..... Morrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrre....... Mooooooooooooooore...... MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is a good one I WANT MOREEEEEEEEEEEEE??!?!?!?!??!?!?!?!

Dropping it... I can actually feel my brain dying and no not brain cells but my entire brain wants to die..........………………….…….…………………………………… I mean it seriously sucks

My fic so meh, I'll put 5 stars if I want. Beginning may seem a but rushed but it slows down after chapter 8, Technically chapters 1-8 were supposed to be one chapter for QQ lol. Ask questions here if you want

MC let momo's brother be raped, and MC saw it for himself, this is another mental disorder that I found today, really a lot of mentally damaged writers on this site.

This is not for me . I personally don't like the world the MC goes but many others might like it . Extra text.....................................................................................................................................