Synopsis
"Hubby, some people ate trampling on me. I want to beat them up."
"No problem. How many men should I send?"
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"Hubby, someone stole my work. What should I do?"
"Should I break their hands or clamp their mouths?"
Assistant: Boss, someone is proposing to your wife"
Hubby: Go and abduct him....No. Get the cars ready grabs coat
Note: The cover picture is not mine. Credits to the original artist at shuttlestock
Don't mind me people. I just felt like adding my own review to my book. Moreover, I truly feel exactly as I have portrayed in the rating. Btw, thank you for taking out of your time to read my book.
The story was okay though it needs some edits. I sometimes don't know who's talking as it was stated. Maybe I just did pay more attention. Some dialogues and inner monologue doesn't end with periods or commas. I think it is just typos but Story-wise, it was niche! Kudos! I hope you take it in a good way! good luck! 👍
I just downloaded webnovel and registered an account and this is the first novel I'm reading. I've always be wondering what my bff used to see in these online novels. She would always grin and giggle while reading that made me curious. I wanted to try out what she was reading and this was the first novel on her library list. I enjoyed it so when I saw there was a place to rate. I had to leave a review. In the future, I'll continue to read.
Haven't really read a lot of romance novels lately but I can safely say this is one of the best I've seen! Love the way the characters interact which make the story even more intriguing to read. I find myself quite immersed in the plot. An excellent job on this novel!
Wow! the interaction between Mo Yuan and Mo Xin Er is very amicable. I though it will be a sad story of MC trying to gain acceptance of her brother. The story is refreshing and I'm enjoying it. The writing quality is good. My only wish is for more chapters!!!!!
This story has certainly done a great job of catching my attention. It begins with just the right amount of intrigue as the reader is given some pretty cryptic conversations between characters I am sure will be established at a later date in the story, adding a layer of underlying mystery to proceedings. There is more going on beneath the surface. The female protagonist's past is still greatly shrouded in this mystery. Apparently she lost her mother and wants revenge, but it is yet to be revealed exactly who or what her target is. The story is written in short and snappy paragraphs and issues with spelling and grammar are kept to a minimum, making this a light and enjoyable read. I love the pacing. The core characters have all been introduced, but there is still plenty of backstory to revealed along the way and one can feel this story gradually building up to something bigger. All in all, I am greatly enjoying this one and am eager to see where it goes.
Been reading the from the beginning and I was just totally entranced. When author suddenly went on a break because of exams, I was beginning to worry that it would be dropped. So thank you author for continuing.. Your writing is not the best but I like it
I'm not usually a big romance person but this story does well to hook you quickly and throws you into the premise fast. Some of the English is a little rough but it looks to be promising.
Love how the story is moving. It has great plot but I hope the author will be able to keep it I'm sync. Well done author. Also, I hope you won't be dropping the novel. I've been reading lots of dropped novel these days and it hurts my heart. Anyways, A_loner, good luck !
Its a nice book for all the romance with suspense lovers. Don't judge until u try. Maybe its ur cup of tea !
I just started reading this story but I like it. It's progressing well and I'm wondering if it will end up as a sci-fi novel. Author please update more in the future and make the chapters long
Great work author, even though I just started reading it I'm intrigued, and it has an Interesting plot too just in need of a little bit of editing and some spice and you are good to go keep it up.
The title is excellent! :D :D :D perfectly attracts attention and makes the reader want to know the content. The plot is interesting and your characters also. You're doing a great job!
Story has a good mystery right from the start and leaves the reader asking a lot of questions. Does a magnificent job keeping up the interests. However, I would suggest a bit more descriptive language and more details added in the story. Also, the pacing is a little fast and could be easily fixed with longer chapters. In the end it has a great skeleton and just needs to be fleshed out a bit more. Looks forward to a great story!