Combat Maid Harem

Combat Maid Harem

Fantasy897 Chapters4.7M Views
Author: Daoist_Little_Yun
4.16
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I turned my assassin into my maid with the power of money! Money is all-powerful!



It was a world full of swords and magic; Lawrend was the son of the wealthiest merchant in town. Since the age of 7, he had been having dreams. A dream about a past life in a modern civilization where monsters are nonexistent, and humans dominate the world. Lawrend saw Iron birds, Magical bricks that display moving paintings, Thunder wielding, and many more.



There was a scene in one of the dreams that made Lawrend’s heart beat fast. A row of a dozen maids bowing in front of him. Each dressed in a french maid outfit.



Something awakened inside Lawrend when he had that dream. A fervent desire to have his very own Maid Harem!



NOTE: READ THE AUXILIARY CHAPTER FIRST



Chapter 69 is the first smut chapter.



UPDATE December 2, 2021:

I have provided a summary for Chapters 1 - 37 as I'm starting to rewrite them. It can be found in the Auxiliary Volume. Please give this novel another chance. I want to redeem myself as an author.



UPDATE January 19, 2022:

I already wrote the sequel for this novel called, "Lewd Cultivation System". The connection will be mentioned in the future, but for now, the connection isn't obvious. It can be read without prior knowledge about Combat Maid Harem.



UPDATE February 11, 2022:

For reasons I do not know, this book got nominated for WSA 2021, which is a huge success for this book. Basically, it means that this book is good enough but not good enough to get the gold, silver, or bronze places.



UPDATE October 3, 2023:

I've decided to pause this novel. I will end it when I have the time. For now, I'll go resume "Lewd Cultivation System"



UPDATE January 1, 2025:

This novel is now going to end soon in about 20-30 chapters. After this, I will also do the same to "Lewd Cultivation System".

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Chapter Length: 1000 words



ADDITIONAL NOTE: PLEASE READ TILL CHAPTER 40+ BEFORE DECIDING ON ANYTHING. I'M SURE YOU WON'T REGRET IT

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Daoist_Little_Yun
Daoist_Little_Yun

I practice the Dao of Shamelessness! You'll see how cultured I really am when you read this novel. Why don't you tip maids too? Maids are special, you know? They clean your clothes, cook dishes, and especially do night services! Crazy, right!?

4 years ago
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Daoist_Little_Yun
Daoist_Little_Yun

UPDATE DECEMBER 2, 2021: I have written a summary for Chapters 1 - 37. It's very short and should spare you from the bad chapters I had written in the past. I know I should've done this sooner, but I really hate rewriting. It's very mentally taxing to that point that I get lazy. Before 2022, I aim to finish rewriting all of those chapters for a brand new start for my novel, and I hope all of you gain a maid fetish after reading my novel. Thank you! Spread maid love to the world!!

3 years ago
52
AimanFaroqq
AimanFaroqq

this is my thought on this novel after reading up to 48 chapters i will be dead honest, this is a novel that i must say.. a hidden gem with extremely big potential to grow with good marketings. It has nice story, good and normal pace plot development, and good character development. I prefer you to put the power level in this world as we still don't know how does one determine their strength. I wish you will have these in the future but anyway its a good novel for me to spend my money on but at the same time, this novel have something that might make veteran readers burst into anger. First of all, although i said the character development is good, the way you write it out can piss people off. I almost threw my phone out of anger reading the first 40 chapter. Yes you want to make MC a naive dumb boy but smart i can accept that, but you exaggerate it. You make him look like a beta japanese male weeb in japan. I suggest you need to fastened his maturity progression in the next 10 chapters or veteran readers will immediately drop this novel. Also about Aleshia, just like I said, u exaggerate it. You make her way too paranoid and this will leave reader a bad taste in their mouth regarding her. Its nice to see a proper relationship progression over his maids one by one as to make the story longer and interesting but dont make it too out of line that it disrespect MC dignity as a noble. Also he is not giving any punishment at all. I would like to see all his maids total obedience to him Also for future readers.. i suggest you all to fast read chapter 1 to 40 as to avoid you leaving this novel.Trust me you will be eager to swipe your card past those chapters. Also trust me as long author not losing few screws in the head for future development, this novel will be a good workout for your slumbering dragon. I will give 4* at the moment because of the updates, character development and world background. I will give 5* after this have more chapters, clarification on power level and a better, brave and mature MC with his maids not being so paranoid. Best of luck. I have insulted and scolded a lot of authors in webnovel considering how they are so terrible making improvement in their novels. I have high expectation on this. Dont let me down My 💰 on you

4 years ago
54
Krisavq
Krisavq

Tbh, I've only read until chapter 22 because the MC is bad and waiting for character development for 39 chapters isn't worth the read. Author could've made the character development in a much shorter time frame than having to wait almost 40 chaps, I GUARANTEE that most of your readers have dropped the story because of how long the character development is. The writing quality is amazing since you can really understand the story well and the Grammer mistakes are next to none. The story can be slow at some points but it fleshes out the side characters well. All in all the story is great I love it but the MC is really off putting and some readers can't handle that, including me. If you can handle waiting for a character development then try this story out, it's good. If you can't then don't waste your time reading this.

3 years ago
19
PyconXD
PyconXD

Look, I sacrificed and read everything (64 ch's), I don't know why the author dragged such a bad start, he wanted to show a character evolution while increasing the mc's strength, but it took a long time and I bet that's why he lost so many readers , it was a good read, I don't lie, I liked what happened from chapter 45 on, it was torture to read before that, but it was good even after the fight with the noble devil , it has potential, but you need to prepare to read in 40 very frustrating chapters, until this chapter the mc will be weak, fearful, perverted, cowardly... so far it was the worst mc I've ever seen, but in chapter 40, something happens to him that changes everything, besides changing his personality, he gets stronger and more confident, in addition to correcting some of his flaws, he doesn't become the best mc's, but he's readable. The story is good, after chapter 40 it gets very interesting, if you wait until then, you'll like it. Writing Quality: 5.0 (I don't complain about this, I didn't find any errors) Update stability: 5.0 (I don't follow since the beginning, but since I started every day new chapters have been posted) Story development: 5.0 (the story is great, it has everything to last a hundred chapters, but the MC development is depressing and frustrating because it takes so long) Character designs: 1.0 (only 4 things are quoted from the characters: whether he's handsome or not, apparent age, hair color and whether he's fat or thin, it's kind of hard to imagine the characters with these descriptions where they don't even talk about details , not even for the main characters) World Background: 2.0 (difficult to assess, almost nothing has been presented yet) PS; But the next arc has a lot of potential, I confess that I'm a little excited about it, so I can increase my score more, remembering that the soap opera is at the beginning, there's a lot to happen, I'm not offending this comment, but I give my honest opinions about romance.

4 years ago
16
absolue
absolue

I liked it a lot, being a strong supporter of the maids but unfortunately it's over for me, what can I say I hate the yuri in the harem, especially here I feel like the mc is getting ntr by his maid, in short so disappointing it should at least be said in the summary, I don't mind it's a threesome but here bruhh anyway it's chap 150 for info 😤

3 years ago
13
Tyrs
Tyrs

Reveal Spoiler

3 years ago
5
BL00DY
BL00DY

I really like this story especially how MC evolve with each contact with his past life personality. Besides, the plot of getting the maids is amazing, as well as growth of their relationship.

3 years ago
5
Topanl4w
Topanl4w

Right, the first 10+ Chapters were so STUPID, CRINGE, FORCED, and LAME. The Guards' behaviour & reaction, the girl action to the MC, the old healer behaviour, the conflict, everything is so forced and stupid. THE MC haven't shown up yet after the first chapter. it gets better. But that beginning is too horrible. i'm the 'first 10 Chapters guy', and those chapters are 3 star almost 2.

2 years ago
4
joshy_rob
joshy_rob

the books a massive headache. it's hard to care about the main character because he's like thin air besides getting bullied in the beginning. I don't like to use terms like beta but this mcs as lame as they come. What is there to look forward to? Not much some chapters deep. Im sure this book is just the antithesis of my being and cause pain only relieved in review. Good luck to the author and fans

3 years ago
4
Devon_Pangburn
Devon_Pangburn

POTENTIAL SPOILER: This would be much higher. At least 4's across the board. However, in a semi-smut novel, the author has opted to make the MC a cringe, purity worshipping man. Thats why its not higher. I wont spoil the scene, but the MC blames a character for not being a virgin in a situation that clearly isnt her fault. Not cool. Outdated, immature and misogynist thinking.

3 years ago
4
Nale_Sheeeeeee
Nale_Sheeeeeee

Ah, yes. Sentou Maids, a man's romance. (I still don't get why I still get frustrated after chapter 38 tho, probs 'cuz the memories thing which only joined him midway, and me being uncomfortable about something in which I can't describe... the mc yet not the mc thing hurts my smol breyn. Aleshia such a great waifu, umu.)

3 years ago
4
TaintedMetal
TaintedMetal

Well, this was quite the read truth be told. The title pretty much says it all when it comes to maids, cause well, if they weren't in the story, this novel would have such a title. With many things (wacky things at most) happening as you read, it will take time to decipher what exactly the end goal is at the eventual end, although it's still a long road for that. Despite of this, the author does a good job at grabbing the reader's attention. The early chapters have something going on at most. Only criticism I have would be the setting, there's not much going on so hopefully that will be the case in the future. If you're a fan of anime that includes maids as either a comedic device or is essential to the plot, then this book might be just for you. Keep on writing author.

4 years ago
4
Untuk_Main
Untuk_Main

After reading for 10+ chapter, I simply lost interest. The MC is so stupid and cowardly and the first heroine (maybe?), Aleshia is simply dislikeble. It doesn't matter if her sister is sick and in need of money, she will kill anyone for money. The best I could feel toward her is dislike, no way I felt sympathy for her, just like she doesn't care about her victim. I tried to read the summary for chapters 1-37, but still not found any interest.

2 years ago
3
PyconXD
PyconXD

Writing Quality: 5.0 (I don't see many errors, for me it's almost perfect) Update stability: 5.0 (I don't need to say much about this, the author usually meets deadlines) Story Development: 4.5 (I honestly have my reservations about giving a grade like this, but I'll leave it at 4.5) Character Design: 1.0 (Very poor, the author can't present the characters well, not even his mc, the mc is the most hateful character in the story, even if after chap 40 he has a good improvement, he doesn't get to please me, he is sometimes very idiotic and not in an ordinary way, but in a way that makes him very angry, the characters' dialogues are very strange, robotic at times and emotionless, the way lovers treat each other tends to be too forced ... but with time it improves) World Fund: 4.0 (I'm enjoying what I'm seeing)

3 years ago
3