The game of gods
Author: Darell_Barnes
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In a world with gods that live eternally, humans are viewed as amusement and gamble. throughout the history of man kind powers was bestowed upon fitting individuals, and with this God's Game slowly came into existence.
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Quite interesting story! I just remembered about grandmaster of Marvel universe. As I am a big fan of Marvel, I want to see what will happen to the humans! Great thoughts with nice plot! Keep it up! I appreciate it!
This novel shows GREAT promise. Excellent attempt! Keep writing and keep improving. No matter what happens, do not lose heart and stay strong. The more you write, the smoother it'll be.
Not to make a lie here, the first problem was about the grammar (tho me too) and also, some words creating confusion to the readers . Just like the other, I also advise Grammarly. Need more work and effort.
saw your request on the forum so I came and checked your story out. It's not bad although, some things like in the description and first chapters are quite confusing. Maybe I would recommend and see if you could formulate your description and sentences a bit differently it would be a massive improvement. Other than that the story has an interesting concept and if you develop it further the story may become potentially really be good. But as said the way some sentences and things are described need to be fixed, otherwise there is just too much confusion in my opinion. If you don't use it already, I would recommend you use grammarly. it has a free version and is very helpful