False Heroes: A Dystopian Odyssey Begins

So fun! This reads like a homebrew Dungeons and dragons campaign that would have been a lot of laughs to play! Glad I gave it a shot. Would say it needs to be proof read but it's very good for a start

Well it is only a start but it seems really cool! Can't wait to see where this goes! The descriptions are good but I feel like you need to expand your word range but I do think this is was pretty good :)

Hearing this would be a part of a possible 10 book series interested me a bunch! Can't wait to see the rest and future of what becomes of the False Heroes and the rest of the world!

Only read thr first 5 chapters but i needed to out this here now so i dont forget! As a major fantasy nerd this hits all the right notes for me! The reasoning of the protagonists is so interesting I might just have to keep going through the night 😂

Okay this was good just had some spelling and punctuation mistakes that kind of dragged you out of the immersion but once it's been proof read I'd love to read again!

Awesome! Really like the protagonists party as they seem like people that would live in a world like this! Really well done! You guys did pretty good!

Reveal Spoiler

🍁ᴮᵃᵍᵘᵉᵗᵗᵉ ᶠᵒʳ ʸᵒᵘ🥖🍁ᴮᵃᵍᵘᵉᵗᵗᵉ ᶠᵒʳ ʸᵒᵘ🥖🍁ᴮᵃᵍᵘᵉᵗᵗᵉ ᶠᵒʳ ʸᵒᵘ🥖🍁ᴮᵃᵍᵘᵉᵗᵗᵉ ᶠᵒʳ ʸᵒᵘ🥖🍁ᴮᵃᵍᵘᵉᵗᵗᵉ ᶠᵒʳ ʸᵒᵘ🥖🍁ᴮᵃᵍᵘᵉᵗᵗᵉ ᶠᵒʳ ʸᵒᵘ🥖🍁ᴮᵃᵍᵘᵉᵗᵗᵉ ᶠᵒʳ ʸᵒᵘ🥖🍁ᴮᵃᵍᵘᵉᵗᵗᵉ ᶠᵒʳ ʸᵒᵘ🥖🍁ᴮᵃᵍᵘᵉᵗᵗᵉ ᶠᵒʳ ʸᵒᵘ🥖🍁ᴮᵃᵍᵘᵉᵗᵗᵉ ᶠᵒʳ ʸᵒᵘ🥖🍁ᴮᵃᵍᵘᵉᵗᵗᵉ ᶠᵒʳ ʸᵒᵘ🥖🍁ᴮᵃᵍᵘᵉᵗᵗᵉ ᶠᵒʳ ʸᵒᵘ🥖🍁ᴮᵃᵍᵘᵉᵗᵗᵉ ᶠᵒʳ ʸᵒᵘ🥖🍁ᴮᵃᵍᵘᵉᵗᵗᵉ ᶠᵒʳ ʸᵒᵘ🥖🍁ᴮᵃᵍᵘᵉᵗᵗᵉ ᶠᵒʳ ʸᵒᵘ🥖🍁ᴮᵃᵍᵘᵉᵗᵗᵉ ᶠᵒʳ ʸᵒᵘ🥖

This is a really cool world you've built here. Only on chapter 22 but so far it has a lot to offer. Hope you do fine with this as it seems like something that could become an epic.

This literally gets better with every arc! Fait play yo you both for being able to bring this content out everyday without fail and been starting something new! Hope the end of book one stays this good :)