Tales of Magus And Gods

Well this should be the 10th review, you already had nine so I thought I will add another one so that you can get an official rating.

Well, Its a good Story with NO BS OP mc or cheat system.. all power is gained through hard work & smartness.. world background also has a lot of potential. So far i read 14 chaps.. all awsm so 5 star from me.

Good plot and writing, although writing could be improved. I'd recommend telling less and showing more. I'm sure you've heard of "show not tell" before. You should use your reader's imagination more often because describing everything is uninviting. Some sentences were hard to read, and the chapters a bit too long. I'm just listing all the flaws, so don't get discouraged! It's a good read!

Okay, let's write a review. Your story is good, it has a solid plot, but it misses the mark if you ask me. Rather than showing us the protagonist going to different worlds, making friends and enemies, overcoming different dangers and traps, and then dying and going to the next world, leaving all he learned to love behind, you lose that opportunity and focus too much on how he was detach from those lives. Plus, the idea of the main character having full memories and consuming the recipient's soul leaves much of the exploration of the world out of the picture, because he already knows it all. I would recommend telling less and making the exploration more tie to actions and movement, as of now it feels like reading an encyclopedia. Less is more, let the reader fill the blanks and create the ambiance; if you describe everything you will end with a boring list of details that don't sum anything of value to the flow. The second chapter, for example, was boring, it had too much description and little action, and action is really important, I found myself looking forward, seeing when it was going to end, and wanted the protagonist to do something and discover things, not the protagonist going outside to give me a tour of the already known world. Another thing, your character is too perfect, make his experiences have more of an impact on his mind and soul, so far it's like he was an immortal god from the get-go, never being a human, never having time to reflect upon his actions, and inactions. As I said, the story has potential, but it needs a little more polish. Keep up the good work and having fun, best regards, Esoj Vi Aifos.

It's really great!! I just started reading so I can't tell about the whole, but the starting is really good and interesting. I really appreciate your work, you're doing great!. Keep it up author! :D

It's getting interesting, and from the Author previous work which he he doing great. I hope it will be a good read. so for now am give 5star and see how it goes.

i only have read chapter one, but i am loving it. there is plot in this story and plenty adventure i can feel it. so that's a review. one free advice, write more chapter.

this fanfic is the opposite of warlock of the magus world. it shows the picture of magus world losing the war with god world instead of winning like in the original novel. it looks interesting. let's see how far it goes 🧐🧐🤔🤔🤨🤨

though nothing much over here yet, the story seems intriguing and his previous work which I read has good writing quality and such therefore you can high expectations for this book!

The storyline seems interesting. So that is why the 5 stars. I have read some previous work of author so I know that language-wise this book won't have any problems... Can't wait until the next chapter