Listening to your heartbeat

Listening to your heartbeat

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Author: Bomb Keila
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The main Characters of my book is Shakeila Thomas and Jahvarne Milliner. Both didn't know each other, Jahvarne was busy with both football and tennis practices plus he has to focus in his classes so there's no way he has time to take a breath; while, Shakeila has to deal with Tera Smith (the school's biggest bully) also she got to keep her grades up in order for her to get a scholarship to attend college.

None have them have time to take breaths both have to be working so hard and making sacrifices in order to stay on the right track.

Shakeila the clumsy girl she always was, was the first to crossed over in Jahvarne's Track and he couldn't resist her; he's been acting as if he's not interested but deep down inside she makes him want to do things he'd never thought that he'd ever do. She's too acting as if Jahvarne's not the most gorgeous person she's ever seen.

now that they've crossed in each other's world what will happen; you'll never know unless you read the story to get a better understanding of there ongoing interaction.

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Shakeila_Thomas

Book needs more improvement, and the updating method should be more accurate. An editing is definitely needed there are some misspelled words and grammar corrections to be made; but otherwise from that it's a good book the background and everything in it is well put together, you can all give it a shot. Enjoy reading this book y'all.

3 years ago
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Shakeila_Thomas

This book has a lot of meanings , and the writing skill is good but need some improvement. I'm asking the more advanced writers to help building this story into a more advanced piece of work. Guys please remember to support, leave a comment, like and can you help me share too😆

3 years ago
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