RWBY helps out two people in need. Two sisters named Cristal and Destiny.

The Chronicles of Grimm

ACTION

ADVENTURE

You are great at writing. and I'd love to read more of your writing, but, there is one problem. the problem I have with this fanfiction is that it is basically cannon with extra steps. also, it's nothing but depressing. if there were any happy point within the book if read more but no. this fiction just reminded me to much of the sad parts of RWBY and none of the happy.

Writing quality [★★★★★]
Story development [★★★★★]
Character design [★★★★★]
Updating Stability [★★★★★]
World background [★★★★★]

Everything on this novel written well and story is amazing to be honest I kinda hooked from first chapter so author-san please don't drop this novel because the story is interesting.Keep a good work and take care yourself!