KYUSUNE THE NINE TAILED FOX

I'm hooked up. Even if there are plenty isekai and system webnovels the author has written his own original story. I think it has great potential and hope there will be many more chapters. (Hopefully others will think the same way.) to C&C2: you have gotten a fan

Definitely on the OP main character side, world building is good and the main character’s personality is one that I can enjoy. Overall, a good book for me.

A few grammatical mistakes (can be easily overlooked). Overall good story and characters (if you're OK with op mc). *msg to author- keep it up and it has potential to be a top tier novel.*

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First of all, the writing quality isn't neat and remarkable . There are many words that needed to capitalize became neglected. There are also few words that are misspelled. The use of punctuation marks are poor making the story look bland and lifeless . Moreover, the use of timeskips are really sudden; and you won't even know that the story are already years after, making me bewildered of his change of age. Overall, considering this is the author's first book I will give him 3 stars for his writing quality. For the story development, I gave him 3 stars because of the fast-paced development of the story . And I really hate fast paced stories because I won't know when would he change in his mindset/attitude. Character design and updating stability are quite decent. I like the character and moreover its updating stability so I gave 4 stars for it . For world background, the places usually are not descriptive enough to evoke our imagination so I gave the author 3 stars for it. In conclusion , this novel is quite acceptable to those readers that overlook author's minor mistake and for those who like OP MC. For me , this is already considered passable if I compare this to other novel I read.

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It is in general a good book however, the writing isnt really good but thats to be expected and nothing too bad, but the style isnt quite right the author uses like regieorders in (...) which is used for scripts and not web/light novels.

I like the idea of the story, I like the characters in the story, and I like the pace of the story. (on ch 11) The grammar is not that bad, but it definitely requires improvement. Another problem I have, is that it is really heard to imagine it… “he covered the ENTIRE nation in an ice dome”… is the nation the size of a city? Why would he make a dome??? Make a ‘Y’. Also some time skips are like,(“we’re going to the city in 3 years” “on the way to the city I…”) I’m not a fan of this. On another note the [P.O.V.] changes are all over the place. Over all 3.6, I might continue reading in my spare time. With time and effort we improve. Keep up the good work author!