Hollow Adventures Arc 1 Complete


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Hollow Adventures

MAGIC

MYSTERY

Hi author 👋
I'm here to shear my thoughts on your book, even tho I'm not into fantasy novels but reading your book makes me read more, I'm just some chapters in but hooked up already 
Just keep updating your amazing work 💛
I would recommend this to everyone, GOOD WORK AUTHOR 💚

Here is my thought about this novel so far from what I read,

World-Building: So far I do really like with Author's effort on the worldbuilding with the world especially how the author describes the world, atmosphere, and even the lore. The author also describes the world well detailed with the design which I truly appreciate the effort.

Character: As for the character, I very much appreciate how the author put a lot of effort into the design and personality. I mean the main character Trace and the others character are all distinct from one another with their appearance. Anyway about Trace, so far his personality is a silent type guy and yet mysterious at the same time which is quite great.

Therefore, I do believe the author will give more depth and exploration about his character or even backstory that related to his goal which is to find the master. I also saw there is some potential to be a very fascinating character with the context that the author gives.

Although the character and World background are good or quite great, there is a flaw that I am very sorry to say this. Sometimes the author has infodumps when comes especially on the fight scene which is me is kind of distracting and not focused on the fight.

Therefore, I rather suggest the author give more showing about the fight and the hit, to make the fight scene more exciting to read. Also, another suggestion I think you should give more showing to make the flow smoother for the reader.

Overall, that's all I have to say about this novel and I truly believe there is potential of it. Thank you very much and keep up the good work!!!

