DMM-RPG Yggdrasil was ending. Guild-master Momonga organizes one last get-together before servers shut down. Most of the old guild members didn’t bother to respond, but some showed up in the last few days. One of them, Tabula Smaragdina, acted weirder than usual, wanting to change his creations and acting like something big was coming.
I don't think the author really explained what this story is. its basically the original story, even making the newly added characters take actions that would lead to the same events as the original. the grammar is great. but there isn't one original action or event that replaces any events in the original. its just adding details to the same story. really long chapters due to copy and pasting the original. waste of time.
I have read all 19 chapters of it and its amazing, masterfully done! I love it and it captures the way the characters in the source material would act in a somewhat divergent timeline perfectly! give us more! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend]
I really liked the idea of the story and so far it's really good............................................. I hope you keep up the good work..............................................
Fanfic than can be considered as an Original novel. I definitely recommend reading this ff. Writing quality is 4 because some chapters is not proofreaded so there is a lot of writing errors. Story Development is 5 because it doesnt stick to canon plot which makes this better than the original overlord Character Design is 5 because they are fleshed out and not revolving into one dimensional trait. Updating Stability is 5 because it sticks to the weekly release rate. World Background is an absolute 5. The changes made by author is fricking fantastic and much more interesting than the original overlord. Definitely a hidden gem!
I am giving this review because there is nothing new. So much of this is just copy and pasted from the original work and its sad to see. this could have been interesting if not for that fact
I may be biased, as I am one of the editors for the more recent chapters, however, that doesn't diminish the fact that I would have given the same rating before I was an editor. Anyone who has read Overlord has always wondered what would happen if Ainz wasn't alone and this is THE fic to read when it comes to such scenarios. The story is unique, the characters are lovely and are I say it is one of the most engaging fics out there.
A great Overlord fanfic with 5 guild members transmigrated to the new world, although that part can make someone stay away from this story but I personally like this for now.
Good writing, just not my cup of tea.
an overlord ff, that's rare ....................................................................... ..........................................
A Masterpiece. If you're looking for something that has genuine story, not something that is written by like a teenage with a hormonal overflow, i recommend this. Try it.
OH MY GOD!!!!! IS THIS A VERY GOOD FANFIC WITH A LOT OF DETAILS THAT CAN HOOK PEOPLE'S ATTENTION? IS THIS ONE OF OR THE BEST OVERLORD FANFIC I READ? YES YES YES YES!
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Really great ! With immense knowledge about Overlord I enjoy it very much ! I hope author will continue and update more regularly this hidden gem should be known by everyone who like Overlord !
I love this overlord fic it has so many aspects that I love. the only downside I can see is the vast amount of charecters which makes it hard to remember which character is being talked about in some moments. But overall this is one of my favorite overlord story and most likely is my favorite.