Where a 23-year-old man suddenly wakes up in a different world, a different body, and with an unshakeable will. He will do whatever he can for absolute freedom and power. Read his adventure in the One Piece World.
quite cool starting but which type of devil fruit will it be logia, mythical zoan or paramecia or a combined. overall story is coming wonderful presentation is also good words are good hope you maintain the updates daily.
4 years ago
1
Zivually
Don't mind me, just another passerby reader. Honestly though, for these reviews straight up tell me your opinion. I like the criticism as it helps me improve as not just an author, but also a student. I have big plans for the future, so stick around.
I give 4 star since this story just started and I love one piece muwhaha and the story goes right in the rock period which is pretty cool, my favorite period is the rocks lol......i didn't give 5 stars only because the story just started lol/:0
4 years ago
0
Bingey
All I can say about this book is you have to invest in it. This got a potential to be a really good fan-fic surpassing the first ones that came before it.
quite cool starting but which type of devil fruit will it be logia, mythical zoan or paramecia or a combined. overall story is coming wonderful presentation is also good words are good hope you maintain the updates daily.
Don't mind me, just another passerby reader. Honestly though, for these reviews straight up tell me your opinion. I like the criticism as it helps me improve as not just an author, but also a student. I have big plans for the future, so stick around.
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I give 4 star since this story just started and I love one piece muwhaha and the story goes right in the rock period which is pretty cool, my favorite period is the rocks lol......i didn't give 5 stars only because the story just started lol/:0
All I can say about this book is you have to invest in it. This got a potential to be a really good fan-fic surpassing the first ones that came before it.