Ecto-Yaksh
Ectoplasma, The power that this world is relying on.
In the middle of this world there's a boy named Aalish, a boy with a harsh task thrown on him to protect the district that he was born in and to win the war that is about to start in 3 years.
The flame of the fire inside him isn't going to heat everyone up in this endless world, that spreads before his eyes. Who will be lucky enough to see this light shine the brightest?
To win the war and protect the district, his search for a teacher/master to teach him how to fight begins!
(I will be posting 1-3 chapters a week if nothing goes wrong, I am a student so sometimes I'll have to take a break from my series for a week (Because of my exams), however I will try to make it up with more chapters for the next week.)
Hi dear readers! Author here! I wanted to write something about the story and its future as well as something more general. This is my first story ever, so it may be a bit amateurish at some points. I do try to make my writing better by reading the reviews that I got so far and fix what they tell me is confusing, wrong or not described enough. Sometimes my updates are a bit random so I apologize for that. Now for the future of the series. I don't know how much will I write, but I don't plan to drag this story on since the ending is already chosen. I am planning for a sequel, but I will see how this story first works out. And lastly I hope you enjoy it. Thank you for your time and have fun reading!
Firstly, not a bad story. I can assure you that most readers will be invested in the story once the author continues to place effort into it. Synopsis: Not bad. Provided the necessary information about what the story is about. That's all that's truly needed. Writing Quality: Honestly, this is where the book falls for me. There are many run-on sentences, a few missing punctuation marks, and even some words that should have been capitalized were left in common. I urge the author to fix these issues as many readers might find an issue with this. Grammar is essential when attracting readers. Story development: Neatly done. The main character seems humans despite being ranked #4. Not too egotistical and not too timid. Character Design: Not much said but It's a matter of preference whether you want to describe your characters in detail or not. Some readers like to imagine how the characters look for themselves so it goes either way. Overall: Not a bad book in any way. The story can be captivating and the author has talent. You just need a little more writing experience and to fix your grammatical errors then you're good to go. The book is far from unreadable, just needs some edits. Keep up the good work author!
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First of all, the story development is good. Personally, I'm not a fan of slow paced novels but yours is quite fast. The characters are most interesting and I love how you synopsis clearly tells what the story entails. There errors are a few (not that many) and I also love the setting. However, not to rush but the novel could do with more chapters. I like it, keep updating!
First, the concept of the story is very interesting, world building is unique, even the author makes a unique language in his own world. Good idea. It's just that the first few chapters are a bit confusing, it gets better in later chapters, but there's still a bit of a headache. Like a paragraph that is too long. This is a good and unique story, keep up the good work!
Wow, okay the lore runs deeper than any book I've seen on here so far. The world-building is great and the story is going in a very exciting direction. This is really a world to get immersed in and enjoy. There are a few things holding it back like minor grammatical errors - it doesn't effect how the story is read so much but there are moments where it does break the immersion a little. But in all honesty, that isn't enough to pull you away from what is a great narrative.
Good novel.
Loved the chapters so far. The synopsis is well defined, interesting and clearly describes what the story will be on. Chapter one was intriguing with well-paced. The way the author describes the events is unique and hooked me to read further chapters in one go. Good luck author for your work!!
I'm still reading it. The story had such potential. The writing style is really good, detailed wording. It's not the best but could turn out to be great in the future! I love it!💕
Hey! This is a nice story. However, there are some grammatical errors that if corrected, will definitely improve the story. all the rest is pretty good, especially the world background.
A fascinating novel with its own language. That alone is compelling. The world background is unique and also compelling. Not to mention the story itself which pulls the readers into an amazingly well crafted and well told world. A must read. Well done author.
This is very unique adventure story with it’s own Ideas and leaves you wanting to read so you know what happened. The writing is okay And the character building needs work. ✌🏻Great story- Just keep updating as much as possible
Lots of action here. Cool. It's fun to read a book like I'm watching anime. Writing is good but needs editing. Update isn't daily. Pace is fast which is good. I see lots of action and cool moves. The characters are pretty interesting with the setting set in a demon world in the mountains. I love the fun creativity of this world. And they speak real demon language. Nice touch!
I liked the story quite a lot. It is really mysterious and interesting. The world background seemed amazing even from the first chapter and the characters were also well described. I am not a professional or something to point out people's flaws, but I guess it would be better if some paragraphs were shortened. That's all. Besides that, everything about the story is amazing. Good work, author~
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