Reincarnated as Superman in Marvel/DC [ Dropped]

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great job with the book it need some better story development but overall is a good book it is just a very rushed but it is a good book nice job.

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it is a great book keep up the good work ffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffff

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Great Job with the story you are doing a great job even though it is your very first book so congrats on that my one problem is the quality of writing focus some of your time on going back and editing your story.

you should delete the last message it shows your uncertain side, it will not motivate some people to be interested in your story (rewritten or not)

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Overall Trash 🗑️ Chapters too short Not worth Reading 😕 No World Building. Not the Best Narrating and Lots of Fake Reviews with Fake ID's. So much Extra Details which aren't really needed. Try to Make an Outline for the story first before writing Good Luck For Your Future Novel's We all start from Somewhere 👌🏻