Warning! I Own nothing! All works and characters belong to their authors, im just a lonely guy trying to have some fun with my life. Now, synopsis- Guy gets reincarnated into UnOrdinary with wishes, will be harem, OP, and at some point lemons shall be here. Now, be warned the first chapter is in 1st person and is the only one to be in 1st person. All others are going to be ing 3rd person. Also I suck. Also! I do not own the picture, if you want it taken down, just notify me, now, I must go for my people need me.
Also! This will be a multiverse novel
dont drop pls i wait a novel like this so long plsssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssddddddd ühüüüüuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuiuuuriirjeheh
I like the premia and... that's unfortunately it? I just feel like you put barely any effort into the first chapter. I get its a fanfic and there is nothing that prevents you from writing innych casual way but its just hard to read... i kind of felt like reading a chat log of some random people role playing xD So yeah the first chapter made me stop... Also, if you are going to change the plot do much then what's the point of it being a fanfic... If the changes were caused by the MC interacting with others that would be great or if he wasn't aware of some changes i will try to read further tho...
really good story..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
.........I will send me an updated version of my thesis with my updated version later this month as well and the rest will quick and easy for the students in a couple weeks
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