Fallout system in the multiverse
Will be cross posting to scribble hub under loskro as well for pc users.
Alastair Williams was an avid gamer at the age of 20 having played all manner of video games by this point. one stormy day alastair had finally finished fallout three with one hundred percent completion and went to grab another game from his collection called dragon quest 11 when a bolt of struck him out of nowhere killing him instantly. this is the story of how he was reborn in the world of dragon quest 11 with a system remarkably similar to in fallout.
This story will follow the story of dragon quest eleven before reaching into various other worlds such as one piece , bleach , marvel , dc , and maybe others. i only own my ocs and all credit for everything else goes to its respective owners.
I would suggest that you take a pause from uploading as often, and try proofreading and formatting your story. Chapter length is small, and every single one has multiple rin on sentences. It would be great if you could rewrite/edit this as it has potential but feels rushed and poorly fleshed out.
shameless review from the author here. so i noticed that there was a surprising lack of dragon quest fan fictions on here so i decided to have a go at it. let me know if you want anything added to the story since as a au world i have a huge amount of room to put any creative ideas on paper.
The story is good unfortunately it's harem which I'm not a fan of. You might want to add the harem tag ..............................................
Overall it's an enjoyable read, the characters are likable and even if right now he's op in the world he's currently in it doesn't take away the excitement I get when I see a new chapter! Sorry if this wasn't much of a review this is my first time writing one.
its really, good thanks a lot for contributing an amazing story to read. will definitely recommend.🥇👍🥇👍🥇👍🥇👍🥇👍🥇👍🥇👍🥇👍🥇👍🥇👍🥇👍🥇
Just binged all 90+ chapters today, and I am glad that there was no nerfing, the story is amazing and so is how the system is used. This is my first review and I highly recommend this fan fic to anyone that likes story’s with a system as the progression in my opinion is done very well.
the story is great but the chapters are getting shorter and waiting like sometimes weeks for a chapter that just doesn't make the wait feel worth it.
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Writer block is the worst . Still good stuff 👍.
thanks for the story I'm a fan of your story's
why is that whenever mc going to multiversal travel in ff the author first world is one piece and always second world is bleach, i understand one piece world is the pick but bleach most i read ff in multiversal travel when they go to bleach it becomes boring that's why i always skip the arc of bleach world whenever i read ff
disliked the starter world and development everything else was fine
I have read the authors other novel the c and d system and I have to say I believe this story to be about as good as it.....................
Good book give it a read ................................................... ...............................................................
I wish for the updates to increase other than that this is pretty awesome for a multiverse oriented fanfiction. Tho i would suggest increasing the chapter length a bit for they are a little smaller.