A random pokemon journey
Alexander was a fairly normal guy on earth or at least he hoped so. Somehow though he had gone his entire life without playing a single pokemon game or watching any of the anime. That changed when his friends kept pestering him about it and he finally gave in and purchased a few of the games that came highly recommended such as emerald , fire red , platinum and heart gold. He also bought a cheap ds lite to play all of them when he was off work. Unfortunately he was struck by lightning the moment he finished the last of them and died. He ended up awakening in a small cave at the foot of a mountain forest and learned he had a system to help him in this new and very dangerous world.
AUTHOR Note-------
This story will only be taking place in the world before the fairy type came out so only those regions exist in this version of the pokemon world. There will also be casual smut and maybe possibly an actual romantic option but I haven't decided yet , also no harems. I would like to add that everything with the system is RNG based so I have no control over it.
Alright, time to dive into another story
Avid fan of the author here. I’ve read a bit of this story and I just want to say, it reads like a train wreck. Theres just something wrong about how the sentences are structured and the frequent syntax errors. Im sure the story will be top tier given the authors track record, but unless the writing quality is improved/revised, then its going to be a huge immersion killer.
It’s alright personally I think there are more Pokémon fics like this that are better but it’s far from the worse. The first few chapters felt like a chore to read but it slowly starts to get better. Will probably update this as more chapters come out
With a "SYSTEM" story.
It’s ok. But the author has this terrible habit of just summarizing instead of telling the story. This has happened in other of his stories. The whole apathy stuff is wierd . The way the Jenny and nurse joy reacted is also so wierd . I had to drop this because of the points mentioned above. I hope the author starts telling the story instead of summarizing.
way too cruel and apathy he doesn't think about his actions and consequences
I like it, slow burn and tons of details. Don't know much of Pokemon except the first anime. Appreciate the Pokemon pics in the comments.
Isn't it supposed to be a no harem story? Why is Mc showing his interest in having lot of conquests?
giving this story 5 star across the board because of how unique it is. Has a system but everything is randomize. Not a collect them all pokemon style fic, but rather a few (currently) op close pokemons. So far gym battles are few in number unlike other stores where they go for 10 or 20 chapters just for a few battles. More focused on the wild life aspect.
That story is absolutely perfect whith a realistic pokemon world and great MC
I rarely ever post reviews but this author deserves them. No typos, consistent uploads, good length chapters, quality story with a solid flow. The author also responds to and listens to readers suggestions. 10/10
love the story, not much fanfics are like this, the writing is a 4.9-5, not many mistakes, the development is going well so far, the story's kinda new so we can't judge much. Character design.. idfk how they look like and I'm too lazy to read appearances, updates are well, 1 chapter every 1 or 2 days, background is good as well. keep up the good story bro
Looks really promising. I've been wanting a good pokemon ff.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I like.
Chap 86 review: Really good fanfic, would be top notch if not for the random decision to make the MC "apathetic". In most of his major character interactions with other humans in the the story he actually exhibits the traits of a sociopath, autist, or nempho in random order. Few if any of his thoughts and decisions showcase him as someone with crippling apathy (i.e Lack of emotion, lack of goal-setting, indifference, low energy levels etc). Also not a fan of the whole not wearing clothes shtick he has going on. Choosing to walk around nearly nude and not wanting to wear clothes is more a sign of autism than apathy btw. To make it readable I basically ignore any description of the MC and use my own headcanon of a regular guy who has trouble being polite. Now: Story has become really stale honestly. The character growth is nonexistent tbh. Just when you think theres growth he relapses and finds more reason to commit senseless murder. The world building has also taken a negative turn, the oligarchical system with living embodiments of gods has made this AU so nonsensical I cant stomach it anymore to be honest. Legendaries are known living gods or are treated as such in this story with how much theyve seen them do and yet people still make the idiotic decision to find small things to fight the mc over when they KNOW he has a legendary himself. Then it just repeats. Alongside that he bends over to anyone named Jenny or Joy and ruthlessly slaughters anybody else. Its not apathy, he’s psychotic with extra steps.