I gotta say this fic has truly blown my expectations due to the massive improvement in the grammar aspect. At the beginning, it was kind of hard to read but after a month or so of stockpilling the chaps, I'm astonished of good the vocab and grammar has become.
Finding a good harem douluo fic is very hard and with a logical mc. Also the author truly knows how to satisfied his readers by including Xiao Wu in the harem because seriously that pairing is nearly impossible to find because almost every fanfic has her with Tang San.
I can say this fic has great potential and I would like to see how far it can go. Also the author should really look into the update stability of this fic although I'm not talking about his mourning in the last few days, I'm talking about the overall updates speed.
3 years ago
9
Demonzor
This story is just your basic overpowered capturing women like Pokémon story. There literally nothing good about not the writing the character or the interactions I’m starting to wonder if the author paid for the reviews
2 years ago
2
KnightShade420
I love this fanfic so far and I hope the promise of an excellent fan-fiction gets fulfilled. I am amazed this was written by someone who is using a translator to convert from the authors native language to english.
3 years ago
2
Arthur_ErosGod
This fanfic has so so much potential and I just cant wait how things gonna turn out. Get a somewhat simular vibe from Douluo: Stealing the Ten Thounsand Realms but with a more mature and of higher quality tune. So far so good. Please keep updating this!!! I believe if this rhymth is maintain, it will become one of the best Douluo fanfic, if not the best. The only fly in the oitment is the update frequency though. Its not too slow but its not enough for the insatiable me😞
3 years ago
2
Void_Queen
This Douluo Dalu fanfiction has great potential. I look forward to the unfolding of the story and the release of the next chapters.[img=recommend]
please update more
atleast 20/day
I really appreciate this novel.
my favourite is Haven chains & golden 🦁
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3 years ago
1
DICKY_MAULANA
I like this fanfic. And I hope the update will be faster and the story will be more exciting in the future,,,
I support your work, keep the spirit of the author..... hehehe
3 years ago
1
Anime_Harry
I really like this story, the pace is not too slow yet not too fast so reader can enjoy everything at their own speed.
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3 years ago
1
KumaKichi
Very good fanfic!!!👍🤩😍,,I didn't really expect it at first but when I continued it became more and more exciting, keep spirit and continue author!! 😘🥰
3 years ago
1
DetachedDreamer
The translation isn't great, pretty bad actually. he calls the academies and Halls a "gym," that alone is enough to deduct points. Harems are cool but swiping 99% of the women is borderline creepy. im guessing he couldn't stand any other character getting a chick? lol other than that the powers seem cool but again he's an MC who wants to hide his abilities and all that nonsense. boring. overused. Overall it isn't terrible just some glaring flaws.
3 years ago
1
bananaman
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3 years ago
1
Lazyboi
A promising Douluo Dalu story, even though it was google translated because the original language isn't english.
The complain I have is that some words are put on repeat too much like "I thought", it's better to replace it with a similar word or maybe add something after it.
3 years ago
1
Shurasik
I like the story
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I gotta say this fic has truly blown my expectations due to the massive improvement in the grammar aspect. At the beginning, it was kind of hard to read but after a month or so of stockpilling the chaps, I'm astonished of good the vocab and grammar has become. Finding a good harem douluo fic is very hard and with a logical mc. Also the author truly knows how to satisfied his readers by including Xiao Wu in the harem because seriously that pairing is nearly impossible to find because almost every fanfic has her with Tang San. I can say this fic has great potential and I would like to see how far it can go. Also the author should really look into the update stability of this fic although I'm not talking about his mourning in the last few days, I'm talking about the overall updates speed.
This story is just your basic overpowered capturing women like Pokémon story. There literally nothing good about not the writing the character or the interactions I’m starting to wonder if the author paid for the reviews
I love this fanfic so far and I hope the promise of an excellent fan-fiction gets fulfilled. I am amazed this was written by someone who is using a translator to convert from the authors native language to english.
This fanfic has so so much potential and I just cant wait how things gonna turn out. Get a somewhat simular vibe from Douluo: Stealing the Ten Thounsand Realms but with a more mature and of higher quality tune. So far so good. Please keep updating this!!! I believe if this rhymth is maintain, it will become one of the best Douluo fanfic, if not the best. The only fly in the oitment is the update frequency though. Its not too slow but its not enough for the insatiable me😞
This Douluo Dalu fanfiction has great potential. I look forward to the unfolding of the story and the release of the next chapters.[img=recommend]
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please update more atleast 20/day I really appreciate this novel. my favourite is Haven chains & golden 🦁 [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I like this fanfic. And I hope the update will be faster and the story will be more exciting in the future,,, I support your work, keep the spirit of the author..... hehehe
I really like this story, the pace is not too slow yet not too fast so reader can enjoy everything at their own speed. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Very good fanfic!!!👍🤩😍,,I didn't really expect it at first but when I continued it became more and more exciting, keep spirit and continue author!! 😘🥰
The translation isn't great, pretty bad actually. he calls the academies and Halls a "gym," that alone is enough to deduct points. Harems are cool but swiping 99% of the women is borderline creepy. im guessing he couldn't stand any other character getting a chick? lol other than that the powers seem cool but again he's an MC who wants to hide his abilities and all that nonsense. boring. overused. Overall it isn't terrible just some glaring flaws.
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A promising Douluo Dalu story, even though it was google translated because the original language isn't english. The complain I have is that some words are put on repeat too much like "I thought", it's better to replace it with a similar word or maybe add something after it.
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