My Lewd Symbiote System
[This is my first novel, the grammar and quality may not be to your liking]
Kelan came from a very poor family that doesn't have any achievements. They were living a miserable and pathetic life. On a certain day, Kelan died in an accident and reincarnated into a new world where bloodline superpowers determine one's status. However, his bad luck dumped him into an extremely poor family again that had no special bloodline. Nevertheless, Kelan determined himself to get stronger, plow the beauties, and seek retribution. Luckily, he inherited their family heirloom the 'Lewd symbiote system.
[Gagaga d*ck head ]
"Stop calling me a d*ck head you f*****g system."
[New mission: Spank Ana's butt]
[Reward:150 Exp]
"You!....."
Kelan was getting along with the symbiote system before tragedy and chaos soon befall the human realm.
The Elven clan stayed neutral as they had sworn not to interfere, thus the war between the humans and the demons greatly affected Kelan, after the demons created a new species called 'Odi'.
The Odis were a dominant race that later terrorized all the existence on planet Olvis including their creators.
Would Kelan be able to save his loved ones?
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Overall, I love it. Writing quality is awesome. The storyline you can get a clique vibe for the first time but just know that this is an original work. Characters? Why, I don't want to spoil it to you. Just read em. I've read a couple of system novel so... I don't know much but at least the system is actually driving the plot. To the author, don't stop writing, story must be told!
This is epic. What a MC...... Hah. His mother and sisters are of another level. And that symbiotic ancestor is too crazy. Overall good novel.
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Is it me or is the mc being immature not make this fun to read?Is it me or is the mc being immature not make this fun to read?Is it me or is the mc being immature not make this fun to read?Is it me or is the mc being immature not make this fun to read? Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp
this is the best review i can make ODI’S NUTS.
es una historia interesante y divertida tiene una buena trama y y los personajes tienen una buena personalidad El H esta bien escrito aunque esta un poco repetitivo las ecena iguales en si la historia merece ser leída
it is best novel for me as it has everything one need ...but chapter are few please upload more chapters
I am just here for the culture, every other thing kills my brain cells......................................................................
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i will rate it 5 first as i will add it in my reading list and i didn't really add it in my library because i've seen lewd on the title.... really...
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it's great, just some grammar problems I would genuinely fix his grammar for free. seriously, this Nivel has much potential, and writing quality is quite important. ok that's all I have to say