Otherworldly dreams

It's quite interesting, if you ask me! And your unique way to present what's in your mind is great! Keep up your spirits, will be looking forward to upcoming chapters! [img=recommend]

Interesting so far. It’s my first time reading this, the way you write is unique. It felt weird knowing and understanding what was going on despite the novel not having the traditional narratives, but in a good way. Since you’ve only uploaded 3 chapters so far, I cant say much, but with steady updates, I believe your work will get the attention it deserves. (Ah, this may be unrelated, but the way you write reminds me of scripts. I feel like a high schooler preparing for our class’ performance again 😆). Please keep up the good work. I’ll be cheering for you :).

So far I enjoyed this book. It has an interesting twist and I've never read books written this way. I think it indulges the reader just like what you were going for. I would recommend adding a bit more description to properly paint the scene because that would take your book to the next level.

Good chapters will not give much praise because this book has only 3 chapters which I love so keep it up and update more chapters . good job author ,[img=faceslap][img=recommend]

i like how this story is written like a play, it's a unique approach that i haven't read before i also think the plot is really good and even without too much description you have a way of drawing readers in, overall great job!