I’M IN NARUTO, SIGN IN ŌTSUTSUKI AT THE BEGINNING

I expected something good from this but....it seems that I was wrong........ I read the first chapter and liked it so much although there were a lot of grammar mistakes it was still understandable.........but after a few chapters it became...............how could I say it........cringy, stupid, forced, and blah blah blah~ advice from me.....don't read this fanfic or you'll get so disappointed with its development.........

I give up reading this its story is OK, but the main problem is the actual writing, like how it suddenly turns into a cultivation Chinese novel style and the names completely change from Japanese names and the anime names to completely Chinese names like how Izumi Uchihas name becomes a more cultivation novel style name.

i think ZeRo_TuBe stole your story, same name but they hold multiple times less chapters but same beginning, or the 2 of could be translating from the same place but it's to similar to not mention

it is very good and it is very easy to get into reading. the plot develops at a good pace. the story doesn't feel forst to happen. so ya give this story a read.

I was expecting better, at the start it was easier to overlook things, I could have put up with the bad grammar, but it just kept getting worse and worse, it’s like a really poorly written translation, with so many strange sayings that don’t translate well

As with other translations of Chinese fanfics, this one is filled with grammatical errors and spelling mistakes. The translator apparently can't be bothered to edit the chapters or look up the correct names for characters, locations, objects, etc. The translator literally turned 'Zeref' from Fairy Tail into 'Jeff' and 'Saitama' from One Punch Man into 'Wu Nasi'...

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Translation is trash. Plot is trash. MC is trash. It is so incredibly boring. Hes so strong yet he does nothing but go around and digest chakra. 98 chaps in and no revenge on the hyuga clan, no killing of minato, danzo, or hiruzen. He kills obito bc he doesnt like him yet lets those shitters live? Also the author is wishy washy with how he wants mc to behave. He keep saying mc is not virgin but pops up at last second 2 times to save the uchiha girl. The first time it was warranted but the second he should have just killed the ninja before he even got the chance to try and kidnap them. So yea imo its not worth the read, plus author dropped before many plot points got resolved. Like this mf minato threw his wife in jail and hated MC even tho he saved them both on the night of nine tail attack… just plain bad writing honestly

gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood

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Es uno de los fan fic más desinteresados que e leído(no de la buena manera), el trasfondo está bien pero solo se menciona en rangos generales, la trama se repite siempre solo roba chakra y has problemas sin interés, no tienes amigos ni familia y solo vives para ser más fuerte, sinceramente es muy Otsutsuki de tu parte MC. Es una lectura literalmente para pasar el rato ya que no te gustará mucho a menos que seas muy fan de Naruto. Este es un mc que hace las cosas enteramente por y para si mismo