Hope you like........................................................................................................................................... :D
3 years ago
3
Mel_Aniv
Wow, all those chaps for free! This is a great read and was shocked by its quality. The narration and grammar were almost perfect! loved it! Everyone should check this out! 👍
3 years ago
4
LucienNg
The chapters’ name are Spanish; but worry not, as all the contents are still in English :).
The plot itself is interesting as far as I got. In short, its about life on the sea, something we all fantasize about as a kid (well, at least I did).
Keep up the good work, author.
3 years ago
1
UniVerseLessOne
It is interesting and intriguing. It really draws you to sailor work, ship dynamics, and all that. Of course, there is a much interesting quirk of the added sea lore elements to be discovered.
The chapters are a bit short though but it is enough to not be so taxed with reading.
To conclude, may their journey be fruitful and so does Mr. Author who is captaining it with his imagination.
3 years ago
4
Photosphere
This is definitely quality work, the scenes are very well described, although not my cup of tea when it comes to genres, it is definitely something anyone could enjoy, the grammar is nigh-perfect, the only thing I'd recommend is to not use Spanish titles are the title is, in the end, the head of the chapter, if you can't understand it, then it's pointless, and not everyone in the site knows Spanish.
Other than that, I have nothing to say, it's excellent, I actually feel sad that with so many chapters you've got this few readers.
3 years ago
3
ThanatosBovet
Although I haven't read all of it yet, I liked reading the story. I have a few comments, like why are the chapter names in Spanish, but it reads away easy, the lack of details belong within the style of writing and is great for people who just start with reading English stories.
3 years ago
3
thehighpriestess
I don't often read horror stories but I got hook by the author's exquisite narration and intriguing plots and characters. To top it all, it's all free yay! Definitely saving it in my library. Keep up the good work author👍💕 Cheers to more reading ventures with this novel✨
3 years ago
3
Rayne_Rue
Love the work so much, Great job Author, I love your work keep it up ☺️Will surely continue to read this book it's now in my library. 💯💯💯💯💯💯
3 years ago
3
KayLillyt_1
An interesting read. Very well thought out and written. There is no mistaken, this is a fascinating novel that must be read. Great job author.
3 years ago
3
Sailfish
Interesting premise.
Even though I am not a fan of the horror genre, I like the novel. Wish everyone would read it.
Other than the occasional oldy worded sentences, everything seems to be okay.
3 years ago
3
Daoist528040
This book have everything you need...
awesome work!! keep up the spirit
and hope to see more wonderful works from you! The writing was captivating, the characters are believable and I care about them!
3 years ago
3
KHRIKY
Very good. Good plot. Amazing. Would recommend................................................................................................................................
3 years ago
3
restful_sins
great great quality and for free as well it's unexpected because most authors don't do that the story caught my attention in a way that most don't it was unique and new I can see myself reading more of it
3 years ago
2
Hamapo
I love this story, mc very interesting keep writing!
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3 years ago
2
Reigetsu_kun
Amazing story and intriguing characters. Could get the reader hooked by the first chapter and an interesting plot, uncloying paragraphs making each chapter edible. Keep up the good work author
3 years ago
2
Yassinoss_49
Loved it!, loved the characters ,good synopsis too, good grammar, great premise, keep it up I loved the first chapter and looking forward to liking more chapters that are to come.
Hope you like........................................................................................................................................... :D
Wow, all those chaps for free! This is a great read and was shocked by its quality. The narration and grammar were almost perfect! loved it! Everyone should check this out! 👍
The chapters’ name are Spanish; but worry not, as all the contents are still in English :). The plot itself is interesting as far as I got. In short, its about life on the sea, something we all fantasize about as a kid (well, at least I did). Keep up the good work, author.
It is interesting and intriguing. It really draws you to sailor work, ship dynamics, and all that. Of course, there is a much interesting quirk of the added sea lore elements to be discovered. The chapters are a bit short though but it is enough to not be so taxed with reading. To conclude, may their journey be fruitful and so does Mr. Author who is captaining it with his imagination.
This is definitely quality work, the scenes are very well described, although not my cup of tea when it comes to genres, it is definitely something anyone could enjoy, the grammar is nigh-perfect, the only thing I'd recommend is to not use Spanish titles are the title is, in the end, the head of the chapter, if you can't understand it, then it's pointless, and not everyone in the site knows Spanish. Other than that, I have nothing to say, it's excellent, I actually feel sad that with so many chapters you've got this few readers.
Although I haven't read all of it yet, I liked reading the story. I have a few comments, like why are the chapter names in Spanish, but it reads away easy, the lack of details belong within the style of writing and is great for people who just start with reading English stories.
I don't often read horror stories but I got hook by the author's exquisite narration and intriguing plots and characters. To top it all, it's all free yay! Definitely saving it in my library. Keep up the good work author👍💕 Cheers to more reading ventures with this novel✨
Love the work so much, Great job Author, I love your work keep it up ☺️Will surely continue to read this book it's now in my library. 💯💯💯💯💯💯
An interesting read. Very well thought out and written. There is no mistaken, this is a fascinating novel that must be read. Great job author.
Interesting premise. Even though I am not a fan of the horror genre, I like the novel. Wish everyone would read it. Other than the occasional oldy worded sentences, everything seems to be okay.
This book have everything you need... awesome work!! keep up the spirit and hope to see more wonderful works from you! The writing was captivating, the characters are believable and I care about them!
Very good. Good plot. Amazing. Would recommend................................................................................................................................
great great quality and for free as well it's unexpected because most authors don't do that the story caught my attention in a way that most don't it was unique and new I can see myself reading more of it
I love this story, mc very interesting keep writing! ...................................................................................................
Amazing story and intriguing characters. Could get the reader hooked by the first chapter and an interesting plot, uncloying paragraphs making each chapter edible. Keep up the good work author
Loved it!, loved the characters ,good synopsis too, good grammar, great premise, keep it up I loved the first chapter and looking forward to liking more chapters that are to come.