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Oh well, there's no shame in liking what you made. This is another long work, but its length will depend on your response- I really hope it's positive. I have undoubtedly taken two generic troupes from the romcom genre and the fantasy genre and smashed them together for this one. More than anything else, I wish to execute everything in a way that this story is memorable. And hype. My main focus here is world-building and writing realistic characters. Hope you guys enjoy this!

jeez... Is it just me or does the contrast between the prologue and the first chapter switch from epic morbidity to a wholesome freshness.. After the prologue, I went into the story with feeling a little tense but the first chapter made me relax... freakishly.. I admire the characterisation so far, which is precisely why I felt refreshed reading this book. All in all a great start.. Keep Writing Good Stuff

First of all this has Netorare that is why this has the betryal tag which needs to be said since the synopsis shares nothing about the series. Now that is out of the way I’ll start the review. The story follows your standard NTR revenge plot the MC spends a normal life at home a “hero” comes in and bangs his childhood friend drama insues they break up she runs off with the idiot with no redeeming qualities which starts the MC’s journey towards revenge. Anyway that’s a basic summary of the plot that you might as well take as the synopsis. Characters Personally I find the characters kinda shallow? Like they lack deph I’m not sure if this is because most of them haven’t appeared often, if it’s the authors writting, or something else but it’s hard to like them in general. Overall I’d say this isn’t most people’s cup of tea because of the NTR it’s worth a try I may have lost interest in this but perhapes others will like it.

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The first chapter built up the world and characters really well, and by the second and third one, the view completely changed. every other chapter was a whiplash and a joy to read. keep it up! 💯❤

Read the prologue, and it's honestly a good read! I mean, it details some things in a perspective that I never thought about, which was quite interesting in itself. Looking forward for the next chapters! Please don't quit the novel though!

The plot of the story is very well designed from the very beginning. and it has been very successfully transferred to the readers, step by step, namely me. I quite liked it. and the scenario is also quite attractive. I thank the author. I look forward to the continuation...

Awesome story ......Enjoyed the story so far!...........Please more chapters from the author. ....plot is just too good from what I saw in the first few chapters. Looking forward to read more....

Awesome story with an awesome plot. MC situation is very heartbreaking in the first few chapters. I just wish that he becomes so strong and capable at the end of the story that all this seem small sacrifices to him (but still it was too heartbreaking). No grammatical errors I found so far and the plot is just too good from what I saw in the first few chapters. Looking forward to read more [img=update][img=update][img=update]

Enjoyed the story so far! The story is imaginative and innovative. The world background is captivating and enthralling. Looking forward to more... keep up the hard work author! 🥰

Author with my alt account here to get to 10 reviews for a rating. Welp. This novel do be kinda dope tho. Grass. Grass. Grass. Grass. Grass.

This is a great story. It is very interesting and captivating. It is a story that makes you hunger and thirst for the next chapter. You should not skip it but read it I bet that you will enjoy it. Please more chapters from the author.

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