In a mage world
"You talk about fairness?? The world isn't fair. Everything is about privilege in the end.The fortunate feed on the misfortune of the unfortunate. Think of the beast you killed for reward, ever thought it was unfair?" Alex snorted.
What would you expect from a cultivator in a mage world?
Alex dies while trying to breakthrough into the immortal realm. He is later transmigrated into the body of a teenager who had just died on earth.
Witthout his cultivation, Alex , with the help of his immortal system, creates his own mage path that makes him defy every logic of magic.
Doing the impossible, facing all alone, undying, gaining lovers unintentionally and also enemies. Alex now has to survive in Niniola, the realm where all mage reside with his family (siblings and girlfriends/wives), protecting them from all danger while at thesame time fulfilling the promise he made to a certain guardian, traveling different worlds in search for the chaos orbs to revive his parents
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how did he live 1000 years without dying with this mentality. mc without a brain. mc acting with his emotions............................................... ..
I haven't read the book yet but the intro looks good, undying, op, system, reincarnation, system, herem, All in one book, am waiting for it to reach 60 chapter so I can start reading, I don't like waiting for updates
shameless author review..... am really grateful to all those who reviewed the book, thanks to you all, I put quite some effort and also experienced a lot of stress, I only have five hours each day to write and am writing three books at the same time, still I still try my best to update this book to satisfy my readers, please keep supporting me, I will make this book legendary! !
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I liked the plot so far, The characters are interesting, and everything about the systems is explained briefly though I would advise you to write the events more clearly or give slight hints about the facts in the first chapter, it will help readers to understand the concept more. overall I enjoyed your story. great work.
Hello hello,I thought it will be better if I left a review since I finished the first 5 chaps. First of all, your book cover has choosen perfectly. It's super cool and hot. That can attrack people. However, about the story I am satisfied. But I wanted to say won't it be better if you make your title as In A Mage World instead of using all simple spellings. I just got an idea like it make the quality to be law. I got an advise to share that the title should be like that. Your preference. ❤️ Keep going author...
I am writing this Because it's unfair that people gave it one star when it wasn't actually deserved ........... ........... Justices for the Novel
still writing this story? would love to know
nice story author is quite talented pacing is perfect character development is good too.
50 chapter preliminary review WQ: much to be desired for improvement, Google doc could help you fix most if not all errors, example you have a bad tendency not to space after a comma, shorthand I am or I'm to simply am, or you'll capitalize the first name but not the last i.e. John doe vs John Doe. SD: it's a slow build up that often times feels unnecessary. CD: The characters feel 2D, not really descriptive on their features. US: no real issues with updating. WB: it's laid out decently. Going out on a limb I see this is your first novel but it feels like you sampled other people's writings and tried to mesh them together, seeing as how this is your first novel it's OK, but when this story is concluded I encourage you to take some time and find your own style and build off that I've given this recommendation to a few authors and they haven't disappointed, so keep writing bud.
Great story so far, though I advise you get an editor to make it more understandable, not everyone understands English well and a small mistake can lead the reader astray. Still, it's an interesting book, each chapter always revolving around a single setting,I just hope you don't lock the chapters too soon
It's ok, nice start for a first book, already have things to worry about even before reaching Niniola,so many people waiting for him already, though there are some typing errors I believe, it's a great book with great update speed. [img=recommend]
What else can I say, I have to give it to you vee, this story do have substance, it's the first book am reading on this app, I don't usually have time for this and I don't know when I will come on this app again, but just know, this big sister loves your work 💓💓
I only read the first ten chapters,but I think that's already worth giving a review,the story is indeed gaining light,I didn't even realize when I got to the tenth chapter. please increase numbers of daily chapters, this book is something
this is epic...so captivating, thrilling and adventurous