King Fool

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Description, fight scenes, beautiful. I'm a nerd for fight scenes and this one has put the mark. I enjoyed reading it and I can't wait for even more to come.

The description is amazing, the fight scenes are great, the grammar is legit, the story is gripping, and the world-building is top-notch. One thing I'd like to see more of in this series is a specific type of description that I like to call visual description. I'd like to know more about what the characters and environment looks like. Another thing that I don't count but see as a bonus is anyone who can describe how something smells. I don't do this much myself and it's not something we notice in many entertainment mediums (like tv). But it is always nice to find a story that can describe that.

I love your story. you really have a great idea. your writing style is unique and marvellous. your plot is really going well no doubt. keep it up. and I'm waiting for next.

Interesting plot. The writing was decent. However, the pacing was dragged down with large dialogues. Though I suppose that's a preference of the author as he started off by telling a story in the first chapter. Details were scarce and characters were slightly hard to imagine (Then again I only read like 2 chapters so that's probably to blame) Anyway, this was a good read. Probably a slow burner.

The Mc did a great job really, I really had to read all chapters to see where this story is headed and I'm happy to say that I can't wait to see more chapters updated soon, keep it up Author great work and I can see a lot of potential[img=recommend].

The story is awesome the best part is that characters don't seen one dimensional..Most fanfic have side characters that are written as if they live for the MC's sake...Over all great writing quality...Story development is great...Update stability character design are awesome as well....