I didn't read it yet but I'm liking the picture of gender bender Naruto and Sasuke [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
3 years ago
40
Juice_9768
trash, dont waste ur time trash, dont waste ur time trash, dont waste ur time trash, dont waste ur time trash, dont waste ur time trash, dont waste ur time trash, dont waste ur time trash, dont waste ur time trash, dont waste ur time trash, dont waste ur time trash, dont waste ur time trash, dont waste ur time trash, dont waste ur time trash, dont waste ur time trash, dont waste ur time trash, dont waste ur time
3 years ago
13
KING_AHLAWAT
Highly Recomended 🙂👍!!
Awesome Story 👌 I've read till ch 19 for now and i gotta say its amazing 👏 i really like it 👍 !!
Everyone Should Read It !!
3 years ago
10
CyberRain_Official
Pretty terrible when it comes to writing quality, English isn’t my first language either but honestly the translation work on this is awful. The character design is alright but the grammar is quite honestly putting me off so trying to get a solid understanding of what is being conveyed is pretty difficult at times. Other than that it’s mostly alright I guess.
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2 years ago
1
MAYANK_KUMAR_4300
Men this is amazing i give it full 5 points but IDNW no chapters are published for 2 months. Continue it please 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺
3 years ago
1
bringer_of_Dusk
bruhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh i wasted HAAAAALLLLLFFFFFF AN HOURRREERE ON THISSSSSSSSS B. S
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3 years ago
1
killersoul
writing quality is pretty good
story development kept me interested
haven't seen any flaws in character design either the MC is rather neutral which in a Naruto fanfic is the best in my opinion
from what I know there isn't a promised update stability so I'll just say 3 stars on that since that's neutral
world background is Naruto nothing special added or anything yet so 4 stars
anyhow that stuff out of the way I think your interactions are done pretty well and while I've never liked gender bending before you actually pulled it off pretty well in this book making it not feel weird (like it should because it's gender bending)
overall good work I'll be awaiting more chapters
this is review at chapter (59)
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I didn't read it yet but I'm liking the picture of gender bender Naruto and Sasuke [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
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Highly Recomended 🙂👍!! Awesome Story 👌 I've read till ch 19 for now and i gotta say its amazing 👏 i really like it 👍 !! Everyone Should Read It !!
Pretty terrible when it comes to writing quality, English isn’t my first language either but honestly the translation work on this is awful. The character design is alright but the grammar is quite honestly putting me off so trying to get a solid understanding of what is being conveyed is pretty difficult at times. Other than that it’s mostly alright I guess.
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5 star. interesting
interesting
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Men this is amazing i give it full 5 points but IDNW no chapters are published for 2 months. Continue it please 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺
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writing quality is pretty good story development kept me interested haven't seen any flaws in character design either the MC is rather neutral which in a Naruto fanfic is the best in my opinion from what I know there isn't a promised update stability so I'll just say 3 stars on that since that's neutral world background is Naruto nothing special added or anything yet so 4 stars anyhow that stuff out of the way I think your interactions are done pretty well and while I've never liked gender bending before you actually pulled it off pretty well in this book making it not feel weird (like it should because it's gender bending) overall good work I'll be awaiting more chapters this is review at chapter (59)
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how I can be a shameless author without a shameless review of 5 stars rating 😔, what a disgrace for the dao of shamelessness, it's the time to correct it!