Online Game ~ I Have A Super Bug In The Game
Li Fang is a perfect goody-two-shoes kind of teenager untill the greatest gaming company in the world suddenly announced that they have created a new game called The Second World
It quickly hit the internet and everyone immediately got their gaming pods
Everyone including Li Fang.
However, to him, this game is a change to break free and explore other side of himself
And things didn't go quite as peaceful as he had hoped
[Your Reward have been assigned]
[Error.... Error.... Reward not found...Reward could not be assigned]
[Assessing the situation...Bug Found... Correcting the Error]
[De-bugging....10%, 50%, 100%]
[De-bugging complete..... Error corrected....Reward found....Reward successfully assigned]
Instead of a 100 gold coins reward, he gets 1,000 Gold coins, 50 Silver coins, 25 Bronze coins and 12 Platinum coins!!!
With a bug, can he continued to the top or be kicked out of the game?
Hi and good evening or afternoon/morning I have finally finished editing the first chapter of this book and let me just say it wasn't as easy as I thought it would be Whoever thinks editing a book is easier that writing one doesn't know what he/she is talking about Anyways, I'll really appreciate if you guys can just look through the new first chapter and tell me if it's better that before At least I'll know I'm actually achieving something Thank in advance, Your Writer
A very good book that has a lot of potential. However, the first three or four chapters have some visible grammatical mistakes. After that everything clears up. Really looking forward to more chapters!
Did a quick review nice one...everything seems nice...also the character development and writing quality.....Keep it up....also pretty old fashioned but nice concept....
Finally reached the 20 Chapters mark. Arc 1 is almost complete, only a few chapters left. Next up, 50 Chapters mark. Thanks for reading so far. Hopefully, there'll be some power stones soon. Lots of love.
Hello everyone, this is the author first of all giving herself five star because why not? So, I have had a lot of complaints about errors in the book. Gramatic and spelling errors to be more specific and I have decided to do something about it. I'll be edited the book chapter by chapter for spelling and errors in the grammar and the app I'll be using is "prowrittingaid" That also means that I won't be uploading any new Chapters for a while Thanks for reading this book up till now, I hope you can wait till I'm done with editing and not just trash it cause I'm not uploading new Chapters. Until I'm done editing, have a wonderful time. Love ya all💞
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