Infinity - Marvel × HP

Despite being well written the author is far too willing to ignore reality to create just minor plot points. Dumbledore, someone well versed in political intrigue, goes full snape in the first lesson with Tom. Fine, he acted that way just to show his dislike of tom to the readers, but why wouldn't he be able to answer all of his questions? for gods sake Hermione granger read several books ahead of starting and doesn't have anywhere near the intelligence or motivation of tom to do so. Someone who grew up as an orphan with a fierce desire for the power magic can provide would have started memorizing every magic book he could get his hands on the second he got back from diagon alley. Deliberately dumbing down both characters to the point of incompetence is straight up bad writing, and I wouldn't trust any author willing to do so with providing consistent characters.

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Please don’t dropped this Fanfic author sama!! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

hope the quality is maintained and updates are regular. well good story so far. Quite interesting and unique imo from others. well good story so far. Quite interesting and unique imo from others.

Haven’t even started reading but I really love the idea and hope u don’ lt drop, just remember a lot of people don’t start adding stories until they have at least 15 chapters. Just don’t drop👍

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Definitely unique on the origin on the MC, I like the link to Tom, and the retcon to the hp universe to include the Marvel one was very natural. The story just started so not much is fleshed out yet but I do look forward to that. The MC is a card board cut out, cliche, selfish MC you find in 95% of Fanfics. He starts saying he'll NEVER use his powers for others. Red flag and a bold statement, thinking there isn't one person that could change his mind. He claims he wants to be free yet shackles himself. He hides behind a mask, is impatient with young and old people, and keeps a slight temper in check. which again very cliche. anything that might be perceived as helping others is explained that it is all self serving. Cliche. you'd think going to hogwarts could energize you for days but no, the MC was falling asleep after 30 mins from boredom. However, if these shackles are removed and his perspective grows then this could be an awesome chance of character growth through out the story. Everything else is top quality. cept maybe referring to prefects as perfects. overall worth the read.

Will there be romance?