The Mafia Couple
Jason sank to his knees as smoke swallowed the sky, the color of it an angry crimson, like the world itself was bleeding. The house before him, her house, collapsed in slow motion, boards shrieking and crumbling as if mourning their own destruction.
His chest caved with a ragged sob, the kind that seemed to come from somewhere deeper than his lungs, deeper even than his body. Everything around him blurred—faces, sirens, flames—until all that remained was the ash.
He should have looked away. Should have closed his eyes.
But he didn't. He couldn't.
The paramedics moved solemnly through the smoke, their silhouettes stark against the firelit haze. The stretchers were draped in white sheets—too still, too final. He counted them without meaning to.
One... two... three.
Jason didn't flinch. His heart was hollowed out, like something had been carved from within him with a hot blade.
It should've been him.
Not Selena.
"No," he whispered hoarsely, his voice splintering. "No, it can't be."
He stumbled backward, eyes wide, brain refusing to bridge the gap between what he saw and what he believed. Reality came in slow waves, each one more unbearable than the last. And then he was moving, sprinting toward the stretchers with a desperate, raw urgency. A rescuer with no one left to save.
"Selena," he choked, reaching trembling hands toward the nearest form.
The heat of the fire still lingered in the air, as if the world itself was scorched. He lifted the sheet with shaking fingers. What stared back at him was no longer her face—just blackened skin, unrecognizable. His mind rejected it. It can't be her. It isn't.
Worth the read..this kind of novel is just my taste and gonna add it to my shelf. I urge the writer to post the chapter soon. can't wait...found this type of level after a long time.
To Author: Okay, I'm not that much interested in a normal romance. But I can say with guarantee that your novel or I could say both the novels have the potential to reach rankings. So keep it up, Author, you just need good stability of updates and a little bit of patience. To Readers: This novel is filled with romance and wholesome. Even though it is at its early stages, one can say with sure that the author has given life to the character. With a little bit more background description, it is a gem hidden inside webnovel. (Fun fact: I'm hooked on this book and waiting for the next chapter)
Writing Quality: The writing is good paragpraphing wise and punctuation. Story Development: The pacing seems a bit fast but sometimes that can hold onto the readers attention more and helps with progression. Character Design: The characters are well fleshed out especially Jason and they don't feel bland. Although some more background is needed to say for sure and we will probably get that later. World Background: I will say the background description and the way you portray the atmosphere can be detrimental to the story so maybe some more detail would be appreciated. Overall the story feels very interesting and draws me in even though this is not particularly my cup of tea. Enjoy this great read!💙
Okay, I'm not going to lie, I quite enjoyed this story. I love Jason's character to be precise, he's so funny 😅😅😅😅, Really need more updates from the author🙏, the story got me hooked😩.
Ok this has to be one of the best romannce stories i've ever read❤️ The emotions, the drama, the tension. Everything is just so perfect🔥💯 Good job, Author👌 I recommend this for you guys, try it out😉You'll love it.
Oh my , what a way to start a story i am definitely hooked, you can visualize the events and develop a deep connection with the characters i love this book ⭐️⭐️
The beginning of the story got me hooked, cant lie about the author’s writing skills, its worth the read, i highly recommend it.🌺❤️..love our fl and ml
Going into this story, I hate to admit that I was slightly apprehensive when I saw the title and the tags. I came in with preconceived notions about what I could expect. Romance is not my genre of choice, and the few romance stories I have read were generic, boring and predictable. Thankfully, I found an incredibly well-written romance story with a really compelling main character. Keep up the great work!
This is a good novel, even though it’s not the type I usually read. But I wanted to give it a try, and honestly, I liked it. We can really feel the emotions of both characters — they came through clearly and effectively, from the sadness at the beginning to everything else. The writing style is also good, and the descriptions are precise. If only the author would start showing more of the characters’ inner thoughts, so we can understand and connect with them more deeply. The pacing is a bit fast, but still appropriate. I wish you all the best, author — good luck!
I‘m already loving this story and can’t wait to keep reading😍 Marie and Jason‘s banter is so entertaining, and their dynamic feels really fresh and engaging! The pacing is great and the writing flows smoothly. Highly recommend!🤩
it indeed absolutely well written and good, the characters are well build and Jason is annoying yet he is fun, from the first place I salute you AUTHOR.
I honestly got absorbed... and I couldn't believe it myself it was that fascinating. Usually, when it comes to FMC, they don't seem to punctuate these level of raw emotions in their narration, not to mention the lack of techniques used, making them fail to impress in anything but SMUT scenes which are more engaging than the rest of monologues. But this one... I couldn't help but admire how realistic and emotional everything there is. Each word has a taste and colour to consume as you devour and savour it very much (I'm a synesthete) to the point you may be able to see these experience by yourself... in front of your eyes. I really enjoy her interactions with the ML which seems superficial on level-surface, but in reality there is more than that: an intrigue and also admiration were etched clearly. I really wanted to read this again and would love to see this more once it has more chapters considering there still were weaknesses, including the direction of plot and writing style alone. But overall, it is really good and I deeply enjoyed it.
Best novel ever I enjoyed reading it ❤️🥰 everyone should read it 😍 trust me you won’t regret it 🥰🥰 the character was really amazing 😻 my favorite character was Marie🥰🥰 she’s a good character I hope people read it 🌸🎈🤞
Amazing story this is a work of art and honestly I’m obsessed like literally obsessed❤️❤️❤️ this is a hundred from me[img=recommend][img=recommend] Umm ray it’s been quite long I was searching for your previous novels but they were all gone……..🥺🥺🥺I hope you remember me though ❤️
Grammar mistakes are too numerous to count but once the writer fixes it you'll have a dynamite read on your hands. Just want to point out that the writer does a good job of creating a romantic mood and setting. The words sizzle off the page with the intense chemistry between the partners. Throw in a little mystery & danger, to keep us turning those pages. What's not to like about this novel, don't wait, give it a try today!