The Mafia Couple

Writing Quality: The writing is good paragpraphing wise and punctuation. Story Development: The pacing seems a bit fast but sometimes that can hold onto the readers attention more and helps with progression. Character Design: The characters are well fleshed out especially Jason and they don't feel bland. Although some more background is needed to say for sure and we will probably get that later. World Background: I will say the background description and the way you portray the atmosphere can be detrimental to the story so maybe some more detail would be appreciated. Overall the story feels very interesting and draws me in even though this is not particularly my cup of tea. Enjoy this great read!💙

Worth the read..this kind of novel is just my taste and gonna add it to my shelf. I urge the writer to post the chapter soon. can't wait...found this type of level after a long time.

To Author: Okay, I'm not that much interested in a normal romance. But I can say with guarantee that your novel or I could say both the novels have the potential to reach rankings. So keep it up, Author, you just need good stability of updates and a little bit of patience. To Readers: This novel is filled with romance and wholesome. Even though it is at its early stages, one can say with sure that the author has given life to the character. With a little bit more background description, it is a gem hidden inside webnovel. (Fun fact: I'm hooked on this book and waiting for the next chapter)

Okay, I'm not going to lie, I quite enjoyed this story. I love Jason's character to be precise, he's so funny 😅😅😅😅, Really need more updates from the author🙏, the story got me hooked😩.

The beginning of the story got me hooked, cant lie about the author’s writing skills, its worth the read, i highly recommend it.🌺❤️..love our fl and ml

welp. This one book that would i not let off to miss on my free time. The way it depict is nice and drawn you to it. The writing quality is really what you could expected from our author here. I won't say much, afraid to spoil it out on this great novel. Just. this is recomended.

Grammar mistakes are too numerous to count but once the writer fixes it you'll have a dynamite read on your hands. Just want to point out that the writer does a good job of creating a romantic mood and setting. The words sizzle off the page with the intense chemistry between the partners. Throw in a little mystery & danger, to keep us turning those pages. What's not to like about this novel, don't wait, give it a try today!

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Awesome characters, great storyline, this book is sure to keep you wanting more, I'm not done with the book but from where I've read I can say this book is absolutely worth the time

An honest review. The premise is good. I am curious about the fire that happened. The author has done a great job with this story and this is sure to be a page turner. The only issue I see is with the pacing and some grammar here and there. Apart from that, a good one all in all!

I really enjoyed reading this book and looking forward to more. I like Jason and can say it's worthwhile to read the book. The story development and character development is good. As per writing, the writer did a very good job and keep up the good work author

Interesting read, author. Very interesting read. The characters are nicely written and bring the book to life. The plot is even written nicely so that you are waiting and wanting for another chapter. Good job and keep up the good work.

I usually stay away from first person narrative but this one hooked me up. Curse you author, why didn't you release more chapters? You made me fall in love with Selena and all the other side characters within a few chapters.  Enough of my tantrum, guys and gals, if you love reading something awesome with romance and intrigue, you have to check this out.  And make this novel a famous one because it deserves it.... love love love author

I love the sassyness between the two main characters. They fight like Tome and Jerry. I am very curious to how this story will unfold. I will be waiting for new chapters! Keep on writing author!