The story was decent and interesting.
A Prince falling in love with his Knight and the Knight having to experience hardships beforehand is an intriguing plot I guess.
What I didn't like was that the chapters were short and inconsistent, some only have about 600-900 words but here's the latest chapter that is about 1000+ words at least.
I'd say that you should try and make it longer like the latest chapter.
I can that you're inexperienced but the story was good overall❤
I hope that you continue doing this and that you could at least upload at least 1 chapter a week.
yeah that's all❤
The story was decent and interesting. A Prince falling in love with his Knight and the Knight having to experience hardships beforehand is an intriguing plot I guess. What I didn't like was that the chapters were short and inconsistent, some only have about 600-900 words but here's the latest chapter that is about 1000+ words at least. I'd say that you should try and make it longer like the latest chapter. I can that you're inexperienced but the story was good overall❤ I hope that you continue doing this and that you could at least upload at least 1 chapter a week. yeah that's all❤