I was reading the latest chapter of One piece. Luffy vs Kaido and who finally won over the other when I wake up in a white room in front of a woman that is pressing me to choose because she has a date soon.
Spoiler for OP fans that haven't read up to Chapter 1044
This will be a mostly MC doing what he wants. they will not be a selfless hero hero.
Warning They will be some R-18 stuff cuz........He does what he want.
don't explain the story show us I wanna see his dad find out not " oh yea I told my dad I got past memories and he was cool with it" that is boring
It's a decently written story, but it's so cringe it becomes pretty much unreadable, I think the author is trying to make the MC really cool or something but he's really not.
I Really Like This Story I Think It's Really Good Well For Me That Is But Please Don't Drop This Is The Only Good Story I Found So Far Kskss
Nice story overall. Should definitely give it a read
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Amazing and very creative story. I just hope you make more chapters. WorororororororoWorororororororo WorororororororoWorororororororo WorororororororoWorororororororo WorororororororoWorororororororo
Too fast paced and the author skips scenes to get to other scenes that he can make sexual Dialogue is bad no character development because like I said it’s fast paced There are other reasons that I just don’t feel like listing
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This story is a lot of telling but not showing. It just isn’t that good. Can’trecommend this to anyone looking for an even decent reading experience. One star.