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The Story of Raenon Targaryen. Daenerys Targaryen's twin brother. Separated in 284 AC after birth.
It was deemed safest to separate some of the children of Aerys II. So Viserys and Daenerys Targaryen went east to Essos, and Raenon Targaryen was sent to The Shadow Lands west of Westeros.
On the other side of the world from his remaining family. This is where the story of Raenon Targaryen begins.
At the young age of 12, Raenon Targaryen begins to chase power in magic, blood, and fire.
Enjoy the new Fanfiction that I'm starting up. It's taking the place of The Libertas Dive and will be updated every Friday weekly on Webnovel. Like all my other books, if you wish to read ahead. Head to the P-a-t-r-e-o-n. And yes, my works on P-a-t-r-e-o-n get updated more than Webnovel.
The plot is enjoyable. So far it looks like the mc has a rosy path ahead of him but a plot that doesn't stress you with twists and turns is nice every once in a while. Gonna be honest, the 18+ scenes are a turn-off when you'te constantly reminded that they're 13-14 years old so I just skip them altogether. apart from that, it's been great. Love the faceslapping
a great story, plus character developpment is done very well. great pairing: Raenon x Daenerys (keeping the royal bloodline pure)
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second review here! to show how much I love this wonderful book. also I have a picture to suggest for Raenon's armor
Harém: Daenerys Targaryen, Sansa Stark, Margaery Tyrell. HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM
In some places the author writes outright nonsense! The author stretches the distances that dragons must fly in a day or two over weeks! The Spider was unable, with the help of his network of spies, to find out where the army of thousands was moving and inform the MC about it... Tywin was magically able to capture and plunder the sunspear, something that even the Targaryens and Dragons could not do in the past!
It's alright the characters are a not really there for me, the origin story of the mc is iffy and the whole thing feels more like a summary of a story.
Excellent start! Please try to finish this story as it has a lot of potential. The pace is appropriate, and as far as I can tell, there are no grammatical errors. Keep up the good work!
author ruined a decent story to add a second wife. im always for harem but this got me annoyed lol dany hated the idea and mc even had a chance to get what he wanted without marrying her but he still chose to put his wife through sharing her lover. story was legit ok but author couldn't help himself and ruined it
It's a harem, and with every harem BS story, things got really stupid really fast. I'm out
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It’s good fanfiction but i don’t like how he burn all bravos even if i can understand ——————————-__————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————
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Historia del OC bastante interesante, desarrollo de la historia rapido pero sin dejar detalles al azar, me gusta que no complegisen los capitulos con iformacion abusurda que funcione como relleno. A la espera de nuevas actualizaciones para ver como continua esta historia.