The idea is good but please give disclaimers if this is just MTL or you're the author and you're using a translation machine to translate your work or you're just editing a MTL.
2 years ago
42
Adem_Thomas
This is all good and all, but even after all these chapters he posted there is still no sign of captain Marvel…honestly that’s wha I came here for he is the husband of captain marvel right? The setting takes place years before, make a time skip or something come on man
2 years ago
28
Aaron_Harvey_7275
Interesting story, but I came here looking for Captain Marvel, but too my surpise, no Captain Marvel, even to 55 chapters, like really man, I only put three stars because of the sheer disapointment, I had when I realized Captain Marvel was not in this story, I will type another review when I see Captain Marvel.
2 years ago
21
FanficGod
i like the Story. read 40 chapters an i think this is a realy good idea behind this
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2 years ago
6
Suzu04
like it --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
2 years ago
2
Viper_PX_Death
No Captain Marvel! Like bro where is Captain Marvel? No where near this story that’s for sure.
a year ago
1
Burningnova13
Don't mind me, I'm just balancing all the free rating the bots gave the author for this NTR trash
2 years ago
1
ChaMy
I've never laughed so hard at a fanfic… the paragraph comments are wonderful.
2 years ago
1
slime032345
i Like it ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
2 years ago
1
Penalune
i really wanted to try and read it because is seemed to be a decent concept
but it was so badly translated that it honestly kinda hurt to try and understand it , like i think when he randomly "Roars" he meant like sighs or something like that and from what i have seen of other reviews they are saying something similar or just doing five stars and typing random stuff, for the fun of it, so please just don't read.
8 months ago
0
Artem_5195
If you translate it, you also need to edit it...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
interesting concept but everything else is just falling short.
2 years ago
0
Simae
the MTL is a good Story i think, i like the idea of the Story.
the grama is not wery good but this doesn't bother me.
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2 years ago
0
Chrislove
I like the idea behind the Story. I Now it´s just an MTL But i Pike the Story [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
The idea is good but please give disclaimers if this is just MTL or you're the author and you're using a translation machine to translate your work or you're just editing a MTL.
This is all good and all, but even after all these chapters he posted there is still no sign of captain Marvel…honestly that’s wha I came here for he is the husband of captain marvel right? The setting takes place years before, make a time skip or something come on man
Interesting story, but I came here looking for Captain Marvel, but too my surpise, no Captain Marvel, even to 55 chapters, like really man, I only put three stars because of the sheer disapointment, I had when I realized Captain Marvel was not in this story, I will type another review when I see Captain Marvel.
i like the Story. read 40 chapters an i think this is a realy good idea behind this [img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp]
like it --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
No Captain Marvel! Like bro where is Captain Marvel? No where near this story that’s for sure.
Don't mind me, I'm just balancing all the free rating the bots gave the author for this NTR trash
I've never laughed so hard at a fanfic… the paragraph comments are wonderful.
i Like it ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
i really wanted to try and read it because is seemed to be a decent concept but it was so badly translated that it honestly kinda hurt to try and understand it , like i think when he randomly "Roars" he meant like sighs or something like that and from what i have seen of other reviews they are saying something similar or just doing five stars and typing random stuff, for the fun of it, so please just don't read.
If you translate it, you also need to edit it...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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interesting concept but everything else is just falling short.
the MTL is a good Story i think, i like the idea of the Story. the grama is not wery good but this doesn't bother me. [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
I like the idea behind the Story. I Now it´s just an MTL But i Pike the Story [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]